Claire's Career: The Shop Assistant page 22
Added 2025-06-08 04:55:09 +0000 UTCThe final page is here! I apologize for the delay - some silly personal stuff got in the way, but I wanted to get this page out for you fine folks. Chapter 4 has been a blast, but I'm super excited for Chapter 5.
But first, Batmite and Mavis pages getting done. Stay tuned!
Comments
Fantastic conclusion 😁😎 Mr Sharma in charge is another level. The panels are awesome, the one showing leaking Claire from behind is a glorious gem 🥰
vanB
2025-06-12 10:20:46 +0000 UTCThat's pretty much exactly what I was going for and I truly appreciate that you noticed. I know these are just dirty comics and I love the casual readers that just enjoy a little one-handed reading, but I'm a comic book artist first and NSFW artist second. I love love love telling stories and conveying those stories via sequential art. So, THANK YOU for seeing the effort I put in. It means a lot.
Fenris Comix
2025-06-09 18:33:17 +0000 UTCVery nice! Definitely can't wait for the flashback/catchup of this chapter in the next! Sorry, gonna art-geek out a little here. There are multiple things going on with this page artistically that are badass. Really like how you presented Mr. Sharma in this page! It's like the perfect setup for showing his true 'pimp-like' devious nature of where this goes. His own reveal/transformation taking place in one page and done well! From acting harmless and innocent in previous pages to now effectively taking advantage of Claire's lust against herself and using it to dominate her, because he knows he can. Very very nice! The thing I especially like about this page as well is how in 3 different panels you handle scene depth in 3 different yet effective ways. First is thru Shape (2), then Saturation (4), then Opacity (7) with each working ideally for the message of the image and the overall page. This syncs perfectly with Sharma's char change and Claire's towards him. He goes from black, to gray, to a black/gray mix as a kind of foreshadowing messaging of what he is about to propose is going to be devious in nature, to being the most intense colored individual in the panel. In terms of structure that supports this as well, panel 2 Claire is visually 'bowing' to Sharma at his feet 'visually', the dark and intimidating presence he presents as. Then she crawls to him while he and his surroundings are presented gray (like he's softened or neutral and therefor approachable by her, but not fully so she crawls), and then he dominates her (and the panel) both in position and saturation at the end. Claire goes from bowing, to crawling, to kneeling. Totally subservient. Sharma's white clothing is super intense in the final panel vs everything else, almost like he's become her new god.
Llaaly
2025-06-09 14:30:31 +0000 UTC
