Feedback request
Added 2015-02-17 04:43:48 +0000 UTCHey guys! I know that you all are already supporting me, and this means a lot for me! But I'd like to ask you about one more thing - feedback. I'm only the beginner artist and my "style" is not the only thing that need improvement. I'm also still not as good in text as I want to be... So I'm asking you about feedback. Anything you find important to say to me: not enough shades, too boring text, bad panels position - anything. This would help me to make the next pages better! This is not only about incoming pages. The feedback about all previous pages are also very welcome! Thanks for understanding!
Comments
Thank you! This would help) I'll try to make em more transparent))
Ginger
2015-02-27 05:51:04 +0000 UTCLiterally the only thing I can possibly think of is the condoms are slightly too opaque and some grammar checking. An example I noticed was one of the speech bubbles in Bird in the Hand pg 5: "It should be easy for a cockslut you are." Replace you are with "like you" and it would make a bit more sense. And in all seriousness, that bit was only nit picking. You are doing great work!
Renn
2015-02-25 15:30:58 +0000 UTC
