Rise of the Bimbos - Script for a story (samples and work-in-progress!)
Added 2022-06-12 06:30:46 +0000 UTCSomething different now for you guys. I started to write a bimbo story almost two years ago, and never had the time to illustrate it. In a way, it' s a good thing because I have learned and improved my skills since then.
I thought I could share it with the bimbo specialists over here, to get your feedback and ideas, if you don't mind! (NOTE:The complete story in a pdf is attached to this post!)
Maybe you didn't know, but my native tongue is French, so I apologize in advance if the text is not top quality.
STORY SUMMARY:
Tara and Liz, two 20-year old, are best friends. One night out together, Tara reluctantly takes strange pills that she finds at a dance festival, thinking they are speed. She gets the energy she looked for, but with a lot of extras. A slow transformation begins that will make her a slutty bimbo f*cktoy. She adores her new look and the blissful state of mind. But the pills need to be taken daily in order to keep working.
Seeing the end of her stock coming in soon, Tara convinces Liz to help her find more of the pills, their only lead being 'Venus Laboratories' written on the label. Meanwhile, Tara permanently thinks about seβ ©, and has an urge to renew her wardrobe into slutty wear only. She gets a total makeover, becomes almost unrecognizable with fillers and new hair, and her breasts, lips and bum keep growing with the help of the pills. She finds creative ways to get money to pay for her slutty wear and seβ © toys. She meets a new boyfriend, ripped, rich and well hung, named Byron. It seems the pills also work for men.
There will start an action-packed adventure to find the source of the pills, convince Tara's friend Liz to embark on the bimbo journey, fight villains, do wild orgies, and maybe save the world along the way!
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-As you can see, I included 1 page of the comic version I had started (pdf) , like 2 years ago now....
-The first images are old renders I did for the beginning of the story. (if you start reading the script, you will follow!). But I may redo them.
-Next, some before-after images of the 2 girls! Comparing start with an intermediate stage. (BTW Liz is the Redhead, Tara is the brunette-blonde bimbo. )
-And lastly, I had fun creating the final bimbo styles of the 2 heroines. Let me know what you think!
All right, cheers!
Attached : -Full story script (Long read), -Sample/ test of illustrated page.
Comments
In the story, they meet a TS prostitute (Brandi). If I were to elaborate his backstory, we could show him starting as a regular guy who was selected for the bimbo/himbo mutation program, except he decides to become ultra feminine instead of ultra masculine.
Fridabee
2022-06-20 22:23:26 +0000 UTCWonder if the 2 girls have a younger brother who starts taking the bimbo pills by thinking they are something else like vitamins or energy pills and then they help him change when he starts developing π
Megahead13
2022-06-14 17:43:38 +0000 UTCDefinitely a great story idea to follow up on. Loving their final bimbo forms! ^.^
person A
2022-06-13 12:21:21 +0000 UTC
