RISE OF THE BIMBOS - CHAPTER 1
Added 2020-10-22 18:34:39 +0000 UTCThis is a bimbofication story I started writing a while ago! I'd like to put it in comics or graphic novel eventually, so there are visual cues for the layouts inside the text. Lots of crazy action and adventure, mixed with erotic scenes. I hope it will see the light one day!
Meanwhile, enjoy the read!
cheers
MUSIC FESTIVAL - NIGHT
3AM. A packed crowd is partying in an outdoor setting. Loud techno music is playing. Colored lights, lasers, large screens and a live DJ.
20-year-old TARA is dancing with her best friend, LIZ. They have known each other since high school. Tara is a regular brunette, averagely cute, but joyful party type and easy going. Liz is active and fit, dark haired, also shorter and slimmer. She is bright and determined.
Aerial shot of the festival.
Wide view of Tara and Liz dancing and cheering.
TARA
This DJ is amazing!
LIZ
Yeah! I'm so glad I made it!
We can see they like to wear the same outfits. They wear 'light' college girl outfits: tied cropped blouses, short plaid skirts, knee socks, pig tails...
Close-up on Tara's face. Her dilated pupils and ecstatic state reveal she is high and having a lot of fun.
TARA
Hey, cuty bunny, I've got to go pee badly!
LIZ
Ewww!.. OK, please don't touch anything! Don't leave me here too long, and good luck!
Close-up of Liz with disgust expression.
FESTIVAL - TOILET CABINS
A long row of toilet cabins are aligned on the edge of the park. Tara waits in line. Finally, a door opens, a sexy girl comes out, locks eyes with Tara and smiles while she passes by her.
We see the long row of toilets with people line-ups. Litter everywhere, people chilling all over the place.
Long shot of tall blonde girl wearing glossy white thigh-high boots, white cowboy hat, a glimmering bikini
top, micro shorts, exiting the cabin.
Tara enters and crouches. While she pees, she is fondling in her cleavage. She pulls out an empty plastic mini ziplock bag.
Tara sitting, panties to ankles. Dimly lit cabin. She is looking into her cleavage, one hand searching.
Close-up. Tara examining empty ziplock bag. Slightly upset.
TARA
(whispering) Shit! I'm out of speeds!
She grabs a roll of toilet paper on a shelf. Among all the empty water bottles left there, she sees what looks like a
pill bottle. She grabs it.
A shelf full of bottles and thrash, on the side wall. Among which, a pill bottle in the shadows.
TARA
Mmmm. Someone forgot his meds here.
She reads the label outloud : 'Nimfo-Manol 200mg Venus Research - 1 capsule per day. Growth and stimulation formula'.
Close-up on the pill bottle in her hand.
TARA
Wow! Stimulants! That's like speed no? (thinking) Should I try one? It's probably not very strong, but better than nothing!
Tara opens the bottle and pours three pink pills in her hand. She looks at them and hesitates.
Tara (still seated and panties down) looks at her hand with a baffled look.
Close-up of her hand. We notice she wears a charm bracelet with teddies, hearts, dices, and letter blocks that write 'LIZ & TARA BFF'
Suddenly a loud knocking on the door startles her. She quickly throws 3 pills in her mouth and swallows them, and runs out, giggling.
Tara startled by the knocks. Jumping up.
Tara popping the pills while clumsily pulling back up her panties.
Tara running outside, giggling nervously.
DANCE AREA OF THE FESTIVAL
TARA
(to Liz) I'm back!
Rear view of Tara approaching Liz, arms open.
LIZ
What took you so long? I was fucking worried!
TARA
Oh! There were lot of people waiting. Also, I found more pills for later.(smiles)
Medium close-up on Tara shouting in Liz's ear. Liz's expression like "oh I see."
The two friends are back at dancing.
Tara and Liz dancing, back to back, they are mirroring choreographed dance moves, as if they had practiced.
Thirty minutes have passed. All of a sudden Tara feels a warm burst of energy, and an intense feeling of arousal.
Extreme close-up on Tara's face. Looking dazed and aghast.
Medium-long shot on Tara, static and completely upright, chest out, as if receiving a jolt of energy.
She continues to dance but much slowlier now. Her whole body is tingling and her belly feels warm.
Tara dancing. Eyes closed. The surrounding appears motion blurred with colored lights, to show they are on a faster rythm.
Without realizing it, her dance moves become dirty, she touches her breasts and caresses her body, her heightened senses make her feel totally horny. She scans the guys around her. She turns to a tall guy, gets closer to him, she looks him in the eyes.
TARA
(whispering) Hey there. (Expecting the guy to read her lips)
Mid shot of Tara and tall guy. He wears a baseball cap, white t-shirt with a logo, and gray jeans.
TALL GUY
(shouting) Hey! What's your name!?!
TARA
I'm Tara! Mmm, I like the way you dance.
TALL GUY
(surprised) Oh...Thanks! Do you want to know MY name?
TARA
(paused, then) Mmm, come with me.
She grabs his hand and pulls him aside.
Long shot. Tara and tall guy coming towards camera. Dancing crowd in the back, with Liz looking at her friend leaving again, shocked and concerned.
BEHIND THE STAGE RIGS
Tara stops next to a tubular structure and faces her new friend. She grabs his head and french kisses him wildly.
Medium close-up. Tara and tall guy kissing, she is in control. Taller, he is leaning forward while she pulls him down. Completely surprised, he doesn't know where to put his hands.
TALL GUY
(after taking his breath) Jeez! You are incredible!
Tara signals him to follow her under the structure.
Tara backing up, leaning. Partly in the shadows but her lips and eyes glitter with a kinky stare, her index finger making the "come here" gesture.
Tall guy follows without hesitation. Tara is feeling so aroused her panties are wet. She swiftly kneels and unzips his pants. She pulls out his penis, licks it and sucks it.
Medium shot from lower angle, between beams of the metal structure. As if seen from a spying bystander. Tara is kneeling and arching her back. We can see her wet panties under her skirt.
Close-up of Tara's face from guy's POV. His raised cock partly hides Tara's face. She looks at him with a kinky stare. Her tongue out and wet lips are open, ready to suck.
Close-up side view of Tara sucking the tall guy. Her hands on his buttocks.
He comes quickly and unloads in her mouth. She slowly pulls out and looks at him, mouth open to show all the collected sperm. Then she swallows it. She kisses the tip of his cock, and zips back the guy's pants.
Close-up of tall guy's face, cumming. Biting his lips and sweating.
Close-up of Tara, mouth open full of sperm. The guy's wet dick, half erected, touching her chin.
Big close-up on Tara swallowing, eyes closed, head tilted up, glowing. Having an intense orgasm.
Tara had an orgasm while she felt the warm cum go down her throat. It was in truth the second blowjob she gave (although the first time three years ago had been a shameful failure). She was surprised how well it went and how good it felt. She was addicted now.
TALL GUY
I need your phone number! I... I'll be so damned if I don't see you again!
TARA
Hmmm. OK, so now that we've met properly, what's YOUR name?
MATT
MATT. I'm Matt! And I'll give you my address too! And my Netflix password if you want! Oh, man! Please let me call you! How can I repay... (fondling in his pocket)
Tara, err... this is for you!
Both standing up. Holding their phones. Matt is nervous, waving his hands while talking.
Matt discretely hands her a money clip which, by the size, looks like more than $500. He also has a zippy bag containing a dozen white pills. She can't believe he's giving her all this for a blowjob. She takes both. The thought that by accepting the money, she becomes more or less a prostitute, arouses her even more.
Top view medium close-up of Matt nervously handing out bag of pills in one hand, and large money clip in the other. Tara leaning, one finger touching her face, pretending hesitation.
TARA
Thank you! I'll see you around, Matt.
Tara leaving walking towards camera, balancing her hips, smiling. Behind her, Matt watches her, mesmerized.
To be Continued.........
Comments
how's it coming?? would love to see even an in-progress version :)
Jonny Rotten
2020-12-04 01:01:52 +0000 UTCThanks! I have about 20 chapters written. But I've decided to make the whole story illustrated! Starting with this episode, which is almost done. Stay tuned!
Fridabee
2020-11-11 17:12:30 +0000 UTC