Untitled - Page 2 (UPDATED)
Added 2020-02-03 02:07:07 +0000 UTCI had exporting issues with After Effects, Photoshop etc. for quite a while now. Images always came out darker than I originally put them into those programs without changing the brightness. I figured out the issue and it seemed to be the color profile settings.
Since I wasn't satisfied with the image and there was multiple things I wanted to change, I figured it would be a good opportunity to rework this page. I changed the angle to have all 3 characters better on it, adjusted the skin of the guy to make it look more natural and fit better to the rest, made it brighter to illuminate especially the face of the guy more and the colors pop more now too. Furthermore I agreed with stger who said the pecs look like boobs on the original image. I adjusted them a little bit because that shouldn't be the case, haha.
Do you like this version more? Let me know, feedback is always appreciated!
P.S.: If you like this updated version I'll rework the first page too
Comments
Agreed with above,, still looks like he has boobs
Mike Z
2020-02-04 11:41:54 +0000 UTCIt is not normal to have so much issues, you should re-check the working process. It must be boring for you to bear those issues . You should check final format of your pictures, raw images looks darker when you open it for exemple.
The undersound
2020-02-03 21:00:59 +0000 UTCStill looks like the guy already have boobs sorry. And the way the left arm of the left girl is placed create an illusion : I thought she had the guy boob in her hand ! That said, all the rest is really well drawn !
Galjo07
2020-02-03 06:31:04 +0000 UTCOh yes, looks much much better. But why did you removed the boobs of the guy. Thought this is a TG comic :-p Just joking. I think the pants of the guy are a litthe to bright now. May it's a good idea to render also the cloth of the MC in seperate layers and adjust them. That's at least what I do in my projects ;)
stger
2020-02-03 06:03:04 +0000 UTCBetter now than later. Now the workload of making them look consistent is smaller. xD
Surody
2020-02-03 02:52:43 +0000 UTCIt does look better but easy there tiger. We are only two pages in and you want to go back and touch up the 1st page already. đ
Bruce W. Liu
2020-02-03 02:51:17 +0000 UTCGlad to hear :)
Surody
2020-02-03 02:49:03 +0000 UTCIt does look way better indeed
M1yago
2020-02-03 02:46:50 +0000 UTC
