Afeminación, The Isle of Woman (P1-96)
Added 2020-04-22 22:27:32 +0000 UTCPage 89-96! 8 New Pages!
Getting close to wrapping everything up. There's a possibility that I finish this comic with the next and last batch of this month. When I'm completely done with the comic I'll most likely change some panels which I like to improve or adjust (nothing major) and let someone proofread it.
If there's a specific panel bothering you, let me know in the comments and I'll consider it while taking a second look at it. I want it to be as good as possible. :)
Enjoy~
Comments
Thank you! It's not really hard but something which I don't do often. Some don't like the face because it doesn't look masculine enough in their opinion. I wanted the male face of the former female look more like it's the same person and I guess some people expected the male face to look much more differently because that's what I usually do. I want to play around with that more in the future, where the character resembles more their former male/female face to keep the idea that's it's actually the same person. I took all your feedback and I'll see what I can do. Thanks!
Surody
2020-04-24 01:39:23 +0000 UTCThese comics keep getting better and better, bravo ! But if you want a thing to improve there are the second and seventh panel where I still think that it looks like the guy has boobs ! Perhaps also 1 or 2 aditional panels when the boobs grow, it's a little too fast this way, especially with their melon size ! Exept that, close to perfect ! I really appreciate the physic of the knew king because it is close enough to the female him but still is very manly. It should have been hard to achieve that, no ?
Galjo07
2020-04-23 08:32:51 +0000 UTC😄😄😄👍
Stormfries
2020-04-23 05:15:57 +0000 UTC
