Rewrite the Stars IV || Page 40
Added 2024-02-24 16:00:08 +0000 UTCWhen we're underneath the lights
My heart's no longer broken
For a moment
Just for a moment
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Can't believe you guys thought they'd just do the dirty on a sandy shore in the middle of the night 2 minutes after their first kiss lol READ THE ROOM.
If you wanted to see them play 'hide the salami' that would have to be a separate comic, like a RtS 4.5, but no one would want that..........
Comments
*whispers* you already have it written, roughed, lined, colored and locked away, don't you? as a writer myself, several of my stories have scenes that were cut... but never gotten rid of. we all have to be sneaky at some point. don't worry. I won't tell.
Ashley Uh... Oops
2025-04-15 06:26:10 +0000 UTCI have to give it to you, Hero – that was well played. It was quite the unexpected twist! I will admit, I let my hormones get the better of me when I typed up my last response. But in my defense, Lincoln was red in the face when he saw Lynn in that state of undress, so I’m sure his mind went down the same track that mine did. After surveying the scene multiple times, this felt really much-needed between Lynn and Lincoln. This past year had been very tough on the two of them, with them trying to not let romantic feelings blur the lines of their sibling relationship. But having them play and roughhouse in the water like they did when they were kids really helped to dispel the tension that had been building up between them. It was really nice to see Lynn and Lincoln so free, not a care in the world and forgetting about what everyone would think at that moment. They really deserve to be happy together, as siblings-turned-lovers and even more as soulmates. And even though everyone and their mother who thought it would get a little X-rated there on the beach was wrong, that certainly doesn’t mean the possibility won’t happen somewhere down the road in the future. Maybe even in the next volume, perhaps…
I.O. Penner
2024-02-25 02:49:27 +0000 UTCWell, the comic's not over yet. Maybe you'll surprise us or leave it to the next comic. With each comic, it's a few years later.
Paul Hoon
2024-02-25 02:40:01 +0000 UTCIdc whether or not theres a sex scene, but I would take a RtS literally any number or amount you wanna draw my guy lol. Especially now that theyre finally an item, time for that sweet sappy couple stuff.
Kevin
2024-02-25 01:18:14 +0000 UTCWait a minute, didn't the hotel episode have Rita & Lynn Sr do something at the pool-
Willy Asaka
2024-02-25 00:37:24 +0000 UTCHonestly I was thinking the same thing, but then I realized they're are too young and not ready for that kinda stuff.
Thuren Miller
2024-02-24 19:52:11 +0000 UTCYeah, they’ve been waiting a long time to be together. They got love sickness bad. LOL 😆🥰😙😘
Paul Hoon
2024-02-24 18:01:07 +0000 UTCHere you go, hope you like it
UnderratedHero
2024-02-24 16:53:34 +0000 UTCi'd like a 4.5 :D
Hootsifer
2024-02-24 16:46:11 +0000 UTCOh and a RtS 4.5? 👀 no one would complain…
Jack
2024-02-24 16:33:07 +0000 UTCYour art is incredible and your story telling is spectacular! There’s no way I couldn’t get hooked!
Jack
2024-02-24 16:31:42 +0000 UTCIt's cool. I don't mind. Knew nothing spicy was going to happen anyway. Keep up the good work 🙂👍🏿
C.E. Zim93
2024-02-24 16:17:00 +0000 UTCIf it makes you feel better, Lincoln was confused too.
UnderratedHero
2024-02-24 16:13:34 +0000 UTCMaybe...
UnderratedHero
2024-02-24 16:13:02 +0000 UTCThat's the best compliment I could receive!
UnderratedHero
2024-02-24 16:12:10 +0000 UTCGive us the real page 40
Corey Peters
2024-02-24 16:10:42 +0000 UTCDude! You got us! 🤣🤣
C.E. Zim93
2024-02-24 16:08:37 +0000 UTCHave to admit, I was never a Lynncoln shipper before I started reading your comic a few months ago 🫢 but now I can’t get enough! They are adorable!
Jack
2024-02-24 16:06:11 +0000 UTCHa! I knew they wouldn't and even if Lynn wanted too Lincoln would gently refuse, as this isn't the time nor place or something.
Happychap2628
2024-02-24 16:04:36 +0000 UTC🤣🤣🤣 you would want them to do the dirty Hero!
Julio vargas
2024-02-24 16:03:24 +0000 UTCBoo
Corey Peters
2024-02-24 16:02:50 +0000 UTC… you know what you did
Antn100Q
2024-02-24 16:02:29 +0000 UTC
