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Rewrite the Stars V || Page 49

Ten more pages to go.

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This sh-t sad bro. ๐Ÿฅฒ

Mark John Banzon

We'll see what their plan is.

UnderratedHero

Hopefully lincoln's really been saving up enough money for a good while. And knows where to spend the night

Darcy lee

Me too theyโ€™re making a critical mistake.

Double Gron

yeah, but it's SO hard :'(

UnderratedHero

Technically, it's not too late, but this is a decision they heavily weighted and considered, it's not impulsive. They made their minds already.

UnderratedHero

Despuรฉs del time skipe claro, o no durarรกn nada fuera de casa?

Jose Antonio Valderas

Canโ€™t stop the power that are in the feelings of love

Jachob(braineyac)

Itโ€™s not to late for them to change their minds

Double Gron

Tears

SoulTy

Lilly it's hard but you have to let them go or they'll get caught.

Corey Peters

( Mumbling From The Sand ) Please tell me that things will be better for Lynncoln, because...

David Mullins

khรฉ

UnderratedHero

Funny, it feels a lot longer to me hahaha. But yeah, these past few pages have been heavy on the feels for me, too. Lincoln and Lynn trying to stay strong, but knowing the pain they're subjecting their little sister and the rest of the family to. Lily holding onto him cause she's starting to grasp what the concept of "never see them again" means. Tough situation for everyone. And yeah, only ten more pages! And then... Gosh, so much left to do!

UnderratedHero

Trust me, it's getting harder and harder to draw, as well.

UnderratedHero

Yup. That's the Separation from the title.

UnderratedHero

I can't thank you enough for your kind words! It's a pleasure for me to craft this story, and for others to enjoy it as well... That's all I can ask for.

UnderratedHero

Oh God this is too much. Being youngest in my large family thinking about my siblings going through this and leaving me at that age in this vital age of development. (And my own private experience). It's just to heart breaking to bare. Such a masterwork of a story. Thank you so much for creating this.

Shinroth

( Getting My Head Out Of The Sand ) ( Excited ) Oh, boy! A new page for the comic... ( 1 Minute Later ) Such pain, such suffering, such life going to waste. Underrated Hero, I think I now understand what this comic is really all about. It's not about them separating from each other, it's about them separating from their family, isn't it. Oh, this too much agony, The Loud House has finally split apart like the continent of Pangea splitting up. Oooh, this is just ding-dang sad ๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข ... ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ I sure would love to see and know what happens next on another page for the comic. But, in the meantime... ( Putting My Head Back In The Sand Until The Next Page Of The Comic Comes Out ) ( Straw Poking Out Of The Sand So I Can Breathe And... ) ( In The Sand ) ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

David Mullins

These are getting harder and harder to read

Jacob Lossing

I know it's a long ways before you can do any of those one shot ideas, but I hope those will be more happy when you make them in the future after this comic is done and you're ready.

Paul Hoon

Again with the feels, Hero! Oh, it was just so heartbreaking to see Lynn try to offer Lily some shred of hope, even though all us readers know Lincoln and Lynn wonโ€™t be able to. I know this is a lot for Lily to wrap her head around, but one day she will understand why her older siblings did what they did. Itโ€™s just going to take some time. On another note, I canโ€™t believe weโ€™re in the homestretch here. Only ten pages left! Gosh, it seems so long ago when this particular volume started โ€“ last June, if I recall correctly. This has been such an amazing and suspenseful rollercoaster ride, Hero!

I.O. Penner

Ya me estรก dando penita la lily, ojalรก y si hagan tr1o ๐Ÿ˜”

Jose Antonio Valderas

Poor Lily. I've been breaking too many characters' hearts in this comic :(

UnderratedHero

We all are. We all do.

UnderratedHero

I cried a little when I was outlining the page and the dialogue lol

UnderratedHero

Now I'm crying ๐Ÿ˜ญ. I pray everything will be ok. ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿฟ๐Ÿซ‚

C.E. Zim93

It really, really messes him up to hear her cry and the way she expresses her pain. It's a struggle to not just give up on everything and stay with her, but the stakes are too high.

UnderratedHero

Oh my god, this is heartbreaking. We love you, Lily! Lincoln, Lynn, hug that little angel and tell her you love her from the heart! And man, ten more pages left. The suspense of how this story will end is killing me! We must know how this ends!

Paul Hoon

She's innocent enough to understand they just want to be happy, but also too young to fully grasp what this really means.

UnderratedHero

Lily wouldn't be able to leave the rest of the family behind, but Lincoln and Lynn wouldn't want her to go live the humble life they're setting themselves up for. She deserves to be raised in a normal family, and that's not something they can offer her.

UnderratedHero

That's a really good way of putting it, couldn't have said it any better myself.

UnderratedHero

I'm afraid their situation might be a little more dire than that.

UnderratedHero

I just wanted to say that I had two dreams about the comic and hopefully want might happen next. In the dream they stay with Clyde for a few days his dad's must have on vacation. Realizing that either of them have a car, license,highschool diploma, or very much money they realize they might be screwed. Thing get worse see there faces on missing poster and eventually the news. Looks like there luck is running out until they run into Angela the college scout. Turns out she still interested in lynn joining the team in California. Lynn is the captain if her team and had a big game that game unfortunately she runs into lori. Turn out she transfer there with Bobby she getting her masters and playing college golf. Lincoln trys to convince her at half time not to tell there family where they are. The coach is calling for lynn to get back in the game. Lynn can't take the stress any more all of a sudden lynn feels sick to and runs into the locker room and that is where it ends. My dreams are to weird and detailed. Love to hear others predictions.

Darcy lee

To them, it's not really "goodbye." Lynn and Lincoln are just gonna start living independently together as a couple somewhere far away. (as long it's not Canada.) Lynn and Lincoln just want their family to be happy and not tied down by their "taboo" relationship. Lily just has to let them go for their and her sake.

CipherRage0909

Lily Loud Stop Lynn & Lincoln Loud For Leaving They Will Go But I Hope They Come Back Before Lilyโ€™s Birthday Maybe 1 Day They Will Lynn Try To Forgive Lily As For Lincoln & Lynn They Love Lily So Much I Wish Lily Go With Them.

Silvester Rodriguez

๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ’”๐Ÿ’”๐Ÿ’”๐Ÿ’”๐Ÿ’”

Thuren Miller

*calls my night works office* I'm sorry, I can't come in tonight, a fan comic writer I follow updated and chose to stomp on my heart right before the start of shift. On another note: damn, can't even bring himself to turn around. But I understand. If he turns around, none of them would leave that step until the tears stopped, someone came and checked on them, or the sun peaked over the horizon (whichever comes first).

Muze Clark

Poor lilly at least she's the last one to see them go. So young to really understand the situation

Darcy lee

Oh god this is somehow even more heartbreaking than the last post. Jeez i really hope lily can forgive them and maybe one day understand why they're doing what they're doing

Youronly_z


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