New 3D Artist - Anastasia Concept
Added 2021-05-13 04:53:03 +0000 UTCGirl puts on a stolen ring and transforms into a superhero
What do you think? Overall not bad perhaps
Seems to be lacking something - emotion?
Write in the comments what you think - will think of some other things
Also, will do a Heidi poll to see who she has sex with
Comments
great feedback! thanks
growgetter
2021-05-14 04:29:53 +0000 UTCslower more detail is needed. we all know where shell end up, but the journey for her and us is key.
theicemancameth
2021-05-13 19:19:47 +0000 UTCI can do effects and stuff you can try me out, I can give you a sample of my Black Cat transformation and that was a first time doing it so I'm still evolving, I only have 8 months Daz experience
Lollyn96
2021-05-13 19:12:17 +0000 UTCreally good feedback - the artist didnt offer any effects and I would have to get them 3rd party - I was going to put a "FLASH" effect in beween pages 2 and 3 but it seems after your comments, its critical to find someone who can do effects
growgetter
2021-05-13 14:50:33 +0000 UTCno effects? the costume feels to come out of nowhere, without no magical effect, the ring looks like nothing magical or fascinating that will make you remember "wow this is the super ring" or something like that, these are my opinions based on my Black Cat transformation I did it recently in my last Patreon comic and was my first transformation of that kind.
Lollyn96
2021-05-13 08:24:39 +0000 UTC
