Chapter 113 - Present - Reyla
Added 2020-05-10 23:54:45 +0000 UTCChapter 2 of 2 for today.
Comments
"Reyla and Nayra didn’t have one, although their family did. Both of her parents had awakened objects, and a few of her siblings. Reyla and Nayra weren’t worthy too young and weak to inherit such an object" This whole section felt a little weak and repetitive. maybe something like Reyla and Nayra did not possess one, however their parents and some of their siblings did. They were considered too weak, too unworthy of the privilege of owning such an object. also i had spotted a missed "too" where you had a to, but i fucked up and can't find it again. ty for the chapters!!
Tim Johnson
2020-05-11 05:25:32 +0000 UTCShe glanced at the Sect Head sitting on top of his mount in silence on top of his mount. hehe
Tim Johnson
2020-05-11 05:06:09 +0000 UTCGreat chapter! I really enjoy Reyla And Nayra's perspective when dealing with Ryun. It feels like they are the most normal people to tell us what Ryun is like
Thaabit Rivertree
2020-05-11 01:02:29 +0000 UTC
