Aak Daar Dovah, Fent Zu'u? Niid. Ch. 10
Added 2025-08-21 21:06:59 +0000 UTCCheeky little 14k I finished up finally. Had to work on a lot of things to get this one right, and I've only just finished it. If there's any mistakes that stand out to you, feel free to use the comment function of the document to make your comments. There's almost certainly a few, and I'm always grateful for the extra eyes, because I'm word-blind after I finish these chapters.
This is the lore-accessible possibility that doesn't get talked about much, and was kind of gently alluded to much earlier on.
We're on an adventure, now.
PDF below if desired.
Document for reading/commenting:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wsa9wNHncT3UKkNDuwYHtW_adPyvq7UIY91xCDnLP5E/edit?usp=sharing
Remember, you get this way ahead of everyone else, so mind the spoilers for them. Though you can allude (gently) if you comment in other places. If there's anything you like/dislike, we can also talk here about it, as maybe there's just something I'm not considering or thinking about. Otherwise, this should be a gooooood chapter.
Comments
Love the way he got that language proficiency. Definitely the most exciting chapter yet. And I love his casual self-assurance, as well. The only reason it's not arrogance is because he's a literal demigod.
Luminant
2025-08-25 23:41:19 +0000 UTCThanks! And hey, the best advice anyone's ever given on writing is just to keep doing it. Eventually you see improvement, and if you're lucky you might even finish something, hahaha!
Procrastination
2025-08-22 12:17:22 +0000 UTCI absolutely loved this chapter, you're doing some amazing work. Keep it up! Also, this really inspired me to write my own Dragonborn in ASOIAF story, though that will be wildly different (if I ever finish it, because gods know I'm horrible at actually completing a story).
Bartje976
2025-08-22 10:42:23 +0000 UTC
