Aak Daar Dovah, Fent Zu'u? Niid. Ch. 15
Added 2025-10-18 07:14:52 +0000 UTCLook at this, an early chapter for everyone! Especially surprising, because this one is nearly two chapters in one. That's really having your cake and eating it too!
Over 17k words? Sheeesh.
Forgive any serious mistakes in it, and point them out where you come across them if you do. You should be able to comment on them, in the link below. It's always appreciated. Otherwise, once I've woken up again, I'll give it all a another read with fresh eyes and fix things.
If I end up having to fix anything enormous because brain is cooked after this much writing in a day, I'll come back later and leave a note for you all to read that part again potentially. Hahaha.
As always, a PDF down below if you prefer that way.
Thanks, Patrons. You're the best. :)
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1h5woL8bvoYw-nFmZduCTkYuv-zHu0cgXrMBj0GgxTL0/edit?usp=sharing
Comments
Like the story, excited for more.
Riptide
2025-11-01 04:25:05 +0000 UTCI believe I edited this since you last saw it. It was originally longer, and then I made it much shorter, but I decided I'd made it too much shorter, and readjusted the lines to fit more to what I originally desired. Hopefully it doesn't ruin it for you!
Procrastination
2025-10-18 23:50:46 +0000 UTCGreat chapter! Really enjoyed the song, that was a really nice touch of Ysmir’s heritage coming through. Really hype for the tournament and finally everyone meeting. Thanks for the great story!!
Kasien
2025-10-18 22:29:53 +0000 UTCBeing up way to late at night lays off lol
Grey Jack
2025-10-18 08:12:26 +0000 UTC
