Forever Summer Chapter 35.3
Added 2022-03-14 17:57:42 +0000 UTCHello, hello~ and here's the last part of chapter 35! I hope you enjoy this chapter, hehe. And for the next, I don't know if I can finish it by Monday, but if I can't, I'll let you guys know. π
As always, enjoy reading!
Comments
no no and hell no..love between girls is bestπif one is a trans girl even betterπππ
toni case
2022-03-22 12:28:08 +0000 UTChmmm~ π€π
Moonlyte
2022-03-20 13:45:41 +0000 UTCNo problem! Btw there are apps and browser extensions like Grammarly that will check your script for grammar issues for you. They're handy and easy to use.
Conor
2022-03-17 11:12:29 +0000 UTCI really hope these lessons involve Rika starting to flirt back with the boys. It must be suspicious if the beautiful model Rika isn't interested in anyone. A gorgeous girl like her has to keep up appearances and go out all the time right? π€
Jadyn
2022-03-15 04:31:57 +0000 UTChuhu, maybe~ π
Moonlyte
2022-03-15 03:38:06 +0000 UTCWow... so many errors even with my proofreading, haha. Thank you very much for catching these errors, Conor~ I'll fix it as soon as I can. π
Moonlyte
2022-03-15 03:35:12 +0000 UTCAhhhh~ thank you!! Your comment also makes my day better! π
Moonlyte
2022-03-15 03:33:15 +0000 UTCIt's all good, because he's just acting... that's all, huhu πππ
Moonlyte
2022-03-15 03:32:12 +0000 UTCoh yeah... now I just notice it, thank you~
Moonlyte
2022-03-15 03:30:37 +0000 UTCSoon gonna be the narcissistic arrogant queen bee of the school
Arawn93
2022-03-14 20:56:39 +0000 UTCLove the series. I'm just trying to help you make the series be as great as possible, these are some mistakes I noticed: Page 3: "I heard a rumor that you're in our school as me, umm what's your name?" - "me" doesn't make sense here. Page 20: "Yeah... But I think you'll get through, Rika-Chan!" - Will sound more natural as "Yeah.. but you'll get through this, Rika-chan!". Page 13: "I overheard you talk with Aiko-san on the other day" - More natural as "I overheard your talk with Aiko-san the other day". Page 17 "additude" should be "attitude" Page 19: "Rika story" - "Rika's story" Page 20: "I have to bring rika to live myself"- "life" instead of live. Page 26: "The more you used to this..." "you're" instead of "you". But great work as usual!
Conor
2022-03-14 20:12:17 +0000 UTCYour comics make Monday better!
AshleySage
2022-03-14 19:39:57 +0000 UTCOooo, more brainwashing by repetition π€π. You poor fool Raku as more and more of your original personae is stripped away
Omagathief
2022-03-14 19:24:13 +0000 UTCI like this showing of Rika's conflict. There are two places on Saturday night you used "Rika come to live". I think you meant "Rika come to life". The first is near the beginning of her on the bed and the later as she thinks of changing near the end of the night.
OhioOkie
2022-03-14 18:34:44 +0000 UTC
