A Tale from Fictricia: Cynthia Biggest's Quest (Part1/???)
Added 2023-07-07 15:28:42 +0000 UTCHey guys, first of all, here's my first experimental comic!! And it's darker than what I usually wrote. In truth, I wanted to do this for so loooooong, but my writing and drawing sucks so I need time to train, but I don't want to wait anymore, haha. This is first time in a while that it's not FS, it feels so fresh. Finally, I spent all week working on this project to fulfill my desire.π Please let me know what you guys think. But if you guys really like it, I might consider turning this into a real series.
I think I'll go back to work on FS some more, so hopefully it comes out before the month ends!
As always, I hope you guys enjoy!
Comments
found the story hard to follow. not sure whats going on and only in chapter 1
Poggie
2023-07-17 07:26:21 +0000 UTCMe too, Jam. But she will come. π
Moonlyte
2023-07-15 09:53:20 +0000 UTCπ’π’ I miss Rika ππ
jam
2023-07-15 01:50:30 +0000 UTCIβll at least try to get FS out once a month dont worry. π
Moonlyte
2023-07-08 03:58:44 +0000 UTCThanks for the feedback and giving it a try. Itβs a theme thatβs not for everyone i think. This one wonβt be long maybe like 4-5 parts
Moonlyte
2023-07-08 03:58:00 +0000 UTCThanks! This is supposed to be like 3-4 pages at first, but somehow it grewβ¦. haha. If I have more time maybe Iβll add in a cutscene between these still frame in the future works. (Something like visual novel)
Moonlyte
2023-07-08 03:56:25 +0000 UTCI'm glad Moonlly that you can do what you really like, we should all try it, it's the healthiest, I wish you the best!!!π₯°π₯° I hope you don't interrupt Forever Summer or put it on hold for too long π¬π¬, especially now that it was getting really interestingππ ππ
jam
2023-07-07 20:29:43 +0000 UTCI'll be honest. I only skimmed this one (got a lot on my mind as of late). From what I got from it, It's not my thing but it does look good and I can see it being a hit with others (again not my thing). The righting is nicely paced and the characters are described well (no overly explaining), I also like the idea of Light Hunters/Hunting. I will not flat out ignore this but I can't see my self getting to invested (again, not my thing).
Richard L Oswalt
2023-07-07 18:05:11 +0000 UTCCant wait for more diverse pictures with characters, not just in a still frame. The faces are pretty well drawn for the emotions (especially the evil grin on page 15)
RikiS
2023-07-07 17:39:44 +0000 UTCNo problem.
Phil G1
2023-07-07 16:59:11 +0000 UTCThanks for your honest opinion, Phil. But that's unfortunate, this is really my favourite theme, haha. So I think it'll be a good time to take a break from Feminization just a bit.
Moonlyte
2023-07-07 16:33:19 +0000 UTCPersonally, this is not my thing but that's just my opinion.
Phil G1
2023-07-07 16:27:15 +0000 UTCOr I mixed them around again. Not the most trustworthy source when it comes to left vs right. But I think I'm right
Hilde
2023-07-07 16:25:40 +0000 UTCIt looks good! Exited to see where this is going. One thing though. The reading direction text says to begin top right. But the (1) is top left
Hilde
2023-07-07 16:24:23 +0000 UTCHmm, I'll try, but I think the font size is pretty large. (but I read everything on my 10" ipad, haha.) Or maybe this format is not suitable for phone. Next I might try to make it 16:9, which is the width of FS image. Maybe that could work.
Moonlyte
2023-07-07 16:14:57 +0000 UTCNice beginning. A suggestion. Could you use the next font size larger for the text. I read this on my phone.
OhioOkie
2023-07-07 15:32:10 +0000 UTC
