Disintegrity 83
Added 2019-02-27 01:24:48 +0000 UTCOnly one page, but once more, a page that needed to be redone entirely. I was never all that bothered by the original but that doesn't make it salvageable.
For one, bumcheeks and buttholes looked like ass. The bad kind of ass. The dick also looked like ass. Cos fuck it, I didn't care ! Well I should have. COS IT4S bad.
Second panel was redone even more. This sequence looked awkward (beyond the bad art) and I think it's slightly more believable seen from the side but it still is a magic wiener that finds the entry to the butt on its own, like a good magic wang would.
The rest is just the same but better. Zee doesn't have Ride to Hel Retribution hands anymore (nice reference, I know). The linework is a lot less thick, which I find sexier even tho I love thick lines. Larsen's face is less awkward, in particular on the 4th panel where the tear hid so much of his face and was so weirdly bright.
The very last panel wasn't redone entirely now that I think about. Zee's hair, a bit of the eye and the bottom line of Larsen's arm are the original stuff ! So there's that. So much time saved...
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And here I was voting against a remake :-/ Glad you didn't listen...
Eldkatten
2019-02-27 08:54:33 +0000 UTC
