Dream Team page 25
Added 2016-07-12 02:09:53 +0000 UTCProgress continues! it's been almost 30 pages since a penis went into a vagina, I think I speak for all of us when I say it's high time that changed.
Also complete style change out of nowhere on Luna's hair. I like this SO much better.
Also being a member of the itty bitty titty committee is REALLY hard when your art style makes everyone look super young >.>' I had to re-draw her face like 4 times before this page became legal.
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You can't reply to a reply, it's kinda dumb but that's how it works.
Dantels
2016-07-13 05:18:27 +0000 UTCWeirdly I cant find a reply to button for you Baku, but I think the pic looks great. The maturity in her language and body behavior covers most of the work and the way she has taken charge helps a lot. Other than the portion with Dashie this has been my most favorite pairing yet.
Skellum
2016-07-12 04:49:47 +0000 UTCYeah, I realized I made her a little short as soon as she got her clothes off, despite her being taller than twi just one panel before :P It was primarily the face that was the problem, and I think I made it work. I should be able to re-arrange her proportions in the coming pages to make her the proper height.
Baku Haku
2016-07-12 04:09:11 +0000 UTCHrm how about more pronounced hip bones? I'm not sure honestly as I think luna looks fantastic. Reminds me more of an Incarnation of Nox instead of Luna...which is honestly probably the same thing >.>.
Skellum
2016-07-12 03:54:02 +0000 UTCthat's basically how it happened; l can't really make the chin too stronk or i'm just drawing dudes at that point, but I put the sharper angles into her jawline to make it look a little older.
Baku Haku
2016-07-12 02:24:57 +0000 UTCYou certainly speak for me! (And maybe stronger chins would help things look a little more legal? iunno)
Dantels
2016-07-12 02:14:14 +0000 UTC
