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Bodysuit 23 #250

Added 2017-06-22 04:38:38 +0000 UTC

All right! Another milestone hit!

Except I realized I completely fucked up something!

So this is something that probably should've been caught when I first wrote the chapter over a month ago. Except neither Cooper and I did. When I do the storyboards, I usually procrastinate and work on that week's storyboards on Sunday before I start drawing the next update. So whenever I'm working on the comic, I'm usually focused on the chunk of text I'll be working with, trying to figure out a good spot to break it up. This method leads us into the screw up:

Kevin tells the same story twice in the chapter. Five pages from the last time he did.

I probably could've stopped and tried to figure out a different tactic. However, as I was writing the chapter originally, I wanted the little gag with Owen going "wait, what?" with Kevin's description of the story. Same with here, I wanted Elaine to have this little moment.

But it's still Kevin telling the same fucking story twice, five pages apart.

I don't have an excuse for it. I fucked up. That's straight up bad storytelling. And I only realized it after I had finished the page and was getting ready to upload it onto here. So I apologize if you find this update to be repetitive and boring. Hopefully I don't make that same mistake again down the road.

Also, a comment I got from Cooper last update was the area behind Kevin being pretty lame, so I added some decor. I'll be going back and adding it to the previous page whenever the next update comes around.