Bodysuit 23 #342
Added 2018-07-23 04:25:32 +0000 UTCAnother chapter in the bag. That sure was fun!
I've gotten some nice feedback regarding the short story I wrote last week over on Discord, so I'll be working on edits for it during work this coming week. Hopefully I can manage the brute of it on my own. Totally went into a different direction that its initial draft. Whereas before it kinda fell in line with Magical Girl Dallas with some serious moments, I wound up pivoting towards Bodysuit 23 in style. Even has some Dying With Thyself vibes going on if any of y'all ever read that. Can't give a estimate on when it'll be finished. Hell, I'm still trying to figure out how many pictures I should draw for the thing. Despite being around the length of MGD (about 10k words) I wanna make a physical edition for the fun of it. I know it's kinda silly to make a physical version of a short story, but hey! If doujins with only 16-20 pages can exist in physical form then why can't a short story? It'd also be cool to hold a bodysuit story in my hand.
In other news, drove to my parents to get new wheels for my car. I always go to this one used tired place since they're pretty good on prices and slap the tires on super quick. Nice people there.
Except they didn't have any tires in my car's size so that was a total bust.
Comments
Violence
Megazone
2018-12-11 09:25:05 +0000 UTCWhat's happen?
Brainhard
2018-12-11 09:24:11 +0000 UTCHoly shit did miranda get a tan
2018-07-26 11:02:15 +0000 UTCI can't recall whether Miranda or Kevin had any siblings, but this whole page reads like a big sister dealing with a little sister, who is actually a much younger brother...
Perrin Rynning
2018-07-26 03:56:04 +0000 UTCI can practically hear her knuckles cracking in the first panel.
DezzieArts
2018-07-23 11:33:49 +0000 UTCAnd Kevin was never seen again...
GodzillaMaster
2018-07-23 10:59:47 +0000 UTCLesson learn of the day: Call Miranda first before wearing her clothes to check if she's back yet or not.
Andrew Storm
2018-07-23 07:36:27 +0000 UTCIf she were in a good mood I would hazard a guess that she may of let him just try the dress on, had he put the bed together and not trashed her wardrobe.
Horrible_Knight
2018-07-23 05:32:21 +0000 UTCThrown off a cliff.
Megazone
2018-07-23 04:52:32 +0000 UTCShould've left your face on Kevin... she wouldn't have hurt you otherwise. Still can't help but wonder what shes going to do to get even with them. I wonder what the punishment will be hehehe ๐
Candy
2018-07-23 04:46:36 +0000 UTC
