Bodysuit #55
Added 2015-04-02 03:32:31 +0000 UTCStill messing around with the art.
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Took your suggestion: <a href="http://megazone23pt2.deviantart.com/art/Bodysuit-55-525709758?ga_submit_new=10%253A1428547493" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://megazone23pt2.deviantart.com/art/Bodysuit-55-525709758?ga_submit_new=10%253A1428547493</a>
Megazone
2015-04-09 02:44:06 +0000 UTCThe only thing I might suggest is some sort of sound effect of the fall. I know it's obvious once you read the final panel what happened but just seems off somehow without that bridge.
DezzieArts
2015-04-02 15:09:56 +0000 UTCXD
DezzieArts
2015-04-02 04:13:43 +0000 UTC
