As I promised yesterday, here's the first part. However, my friend wasn't able to pull through for me, so this is unedited, raw, and hardcore (the story itself is pretty PG). It shouldn't be too bad since I went off a heavily edited script I already wrote a while back.
As this is still a work in progress, I'm open to any suggestions. Please feel free to comment about what you liked, disliked, etc. Anyone who gives some feedback will be put in the special thanks section once I'm finished with the second part.