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Bodysuit 23 #159

Added 2016-06-17 17:59:03 +0000 UTC

This strip was a lot of fun I thought. Of course, the idea I set out with wound up changing by the time I finished it. Originally it was gonna be Kevin doing a "war never changes" monologue with Owen shooting him in the back because you don't go into long monologues in the middle of a battle. But that wasn't as funny in the end.

In VN related news: I had cooper look over the first draft for opinions and there was only really one complaint from him: "It's too short." Which, to be honest, it was suppose to be short in the first place, but hey. Now I'm going back and trying to find spots to expand on and add a few additional scenes to get that length up a bit.

That truly is the miracle of having someone else working with you on a story. That and forcing someone to read awful, awful first drafts and let them suffer with you.