MGD6 Storyplot Check
Added 2019-03-10 02:34:42 +0000 UTCHey guys! My editor friend has gone AWOL again, and I don't want to delay episode 6 seven to eight months again like what happened with episode 5, so I've decided to continue onward.
Current issue I'm having is I haven't had anyone give thoughts on the plot beats in episode 6. If anyone has time to read through episode 6 and give me thoughts on the story it would be a huge help. There's certain sections that I'm still unsure of, and hearing other people's thoughts will give me a good idea on whether I should leave it alone or sit down and rewrite them.
I've done some editing already, so you don't have to fear reading a first draft story. This isn't to say there's still issues, but as of this time I'm less interested in nitty gritty issues like grammar/misspellings/commas, etc., and more of the overall story itself.
Any of y'all that give feedback I'll be sure to include in a special thanks section at the end of the episode, similar to what I did last year with Cafe. (Though if you want to go by a different alias than what you use on patreon as this will appear in the version on Amazon and any other editions down the road let me know ahead of time.)
