Bodysuit 23 #683
Added 2022-07-14 00:22:21 +0000 UTCI'm digging how the thicker outlines are looking. Especially now that I got a better understanding on when to use them, like with body parts being in front of the body, like an arm or hand. Or thickness depending on distance between characters. It really makes everyone "pop" out more.
In Lune news, I scrapped and rewrote the chapter that's due to hit Honeyfeed Friday, as a friend mentioned it was boring and nothing happened in it. I'm behind on writing, but I guess this turned out okay, as the rewrite would've meant I'd have to throw away the ideas I was going with for the next chapter.
Even so, man, I'm pacing real slowly compared to where I wanna be. I have a feeling I'm gonna have to rush the ending and write it all within a few days with little feedback, and post them in a bulk post right before the contest ends. Here's hoping it doesn't come to that!
Comments
I like the thicker lines as well. Particularly in panel 5.
DezzieArts
2022-07-15 13:17:02 +0000 UTCI'm looking forward to seeing the direction Owen's relationship with Kevin/Doris goes now that he's in on the secret.
DezzieArts
2022-07-14 13:23:09 +0000 UTCFor someone like Kevin, who's most excersize was to get from the bed to the couch to watch TV before, 6 miles is a long run indeed (~10 km-s). Hell, even for more active people runnning (not walking or hiking) 10k is a lot, even if the bodysuit helps with it. So Kevin's reaction, in my book, is totally justified :D
AnneCD88
2022-07-14 10:53:38 +0000 UTCJust love how the dog's a total, lovable dope here And it'd be neat to see Owen have a suit of his own
GodzillaMaster
2022-07-14 03:44:00 +0000 UTCOmg I love Kevin's energy in this. So much for him being wiped out after excersizing xD
kurogetsui
2022-07-14 00:24:21 +0000 UTC
