Shadow

RE:Sunshower 5-6

Added 2023-09-08 19:07:33 +0000 UTC

A couple of things I didn’t know how many words I was putting! Very glad I can put less because i used to use them like stage directions almost also “show don’t tell” right LMFAO I think I still kinda struggle with that tbf but it’s gotten much better I’m a wordy person 😀!!

Love comparing noeleses (I know I talk about comparing contrasting a lot on here it is like the only way I learn I’m sorry if you’re tired of it ;-;) I think my original intention at the time I was showing the introduction of Jamie’s whole thing with Noel where he thinks he’s more ~princelier~ than he comes off so the way it was done before (coupled with the fact that his design was not fully settled in my brain) he ended up looking like he has like 4 different haircuts throughout this whole part

HAHAHA LOL the execution was not good but I think that it is a good theme since it’s the premise of the whole thingy! But not knowing who Jamie yet I feel like was the reason it wouldn’t have worked out so early anyway! I don’t know if any of that makes sense it’s a little thing that doesn’t matter! ANWYAY WHAT ACTUALLY MATTERS TO ME Noel, my little guy//// I’m so glad I get to make him more handsome this time around you have no idea I don’t think I would even be redoing this if it wasn’t for how SHIT he looks to me no offense nole. Oh and this is when I randomly decided Jamie deserves freckles??? 5 pages in 😭 ???