RE: FGN—12
Added 2024-04-29 09:15:36 +0000 UTCComments
Although I agree she didnt get much screen time, I personally liked Mito the most of his harem members. Think its due to it being a bit of NTR mixed with gilf energy lol. I was waiting for the chapters where her husband finds out after being brought back with Edo Tensei
Manny Valdez
2024-05-17 06:02:45 +0000 UTCI understand, if she participates more in the Plot this time, her presence will be more substantial, because honestly in the other fanfic, she felt almost useless, and just appeared to annoy everyone, after all, what's the point of an OP Woman if she doesn't Is it useful for the MC or the people around him? In the other novel it was Kai and Tsunade who basically did everything, honestly at this point if Kurama's part was transferred to Tsunade it would be even better than Mito. I hope that in this one she changes, and has a more active participation even after her fake 'death', perhaps acting from the shadows or something? Meh, I don't particularly like her as a character, but as an author I try to see the plot points she can get involved in. And overall, except for a fuck body and teaching the MC in the early stages, it became useless later on. [in the old romance.] Not to mention that her personality hasn't improved much, so meh.
Victor Weismann
2024-05-01 12:12:33 +0000 UTCMito was meant to be selfish in the previous and this version. While a hero's death sounds nice, it's a fact that Uzumaki died while Mito still lived (as seen in Minato oneshot). She could have done something then, too. The act of sealing Kai and Kushina also proves that she is sufficiently selfish even if kind. As for kurama, yeah, that's another plot point for another harem character so that might not change. What I will try doing better is involving Mito in a few more smutty things, have her presence subtly influence others, and even make her serve as a vault of old myths that hint about several space rabbit shenanigans
FanHarem
2024-05-01 03:07:03 +0000 UTCFumu, will this follow the same plot? I'm talking about grandma op who used kurama as a drum to make herself younger, etc. After our conversation, I saw that he got rid of the seal a few chapters later, I gave the novel another chance because of that, and I just finished it, the whole plot was very good, but Mito seemed quite... Out of place ? I mean, after her adventure with the Uzamiki, she was basically gone for several chapters, like a LOT. In the end, it only served to train Kushina and Kai, make a female kurama [leaving it weaker due to being divided], and fight in the Uzu war. This time, it would be interesting for her to 'regain her youth' and become stronger, but not to the point of sharing Kurama or becoming OP at the level of Madara and Hashirama at their peak. Something like Pain maybe? This time instead of staying alive, she would die in Uzu, something like an Old Uzumaki sacrificing himself for his people, she did so much for Konoha, so that in the end, she would do something for Uzu, it would be poetic to see. Something like the death of a hero. You could make a whole scene with Kai and Kushina about this, giving both of them a purpose. An aspect that was failed because of her false death. Kai's purpose will be to get stronger at all costs to possibly bring her back, and Kushina's purpose will be to be an Uzumaki like her grandmother? Who knows. I feel like this storyline would give the character even more weight, and not just serve as a teacher that the MC will fuck in the future. In this storyline he can fuck her in the future, he just needs to bring him back when he finds out about the Rinnegan's technique of bringing others back to life.
Victor Weismann
2024-04-30 22:44:24 +0000 UTC
