Commission: Finishing First
Added 2025-03-19 18:43:21 +0000 UTCHey! So we have now our third-to-last commission before we kick off the bonus story next month. I have one more in the queue, and one more person who's responded but still thinking over what they want. (Note: there's no expiration date, so if you discover you missed a commission winning message 6 months from now, don't hesitate to let me know!)
It's a fun little piece. The execution reminds me a bit of a less (differently?) dishonest take on My Name Is Noble. Hopefully you enjoy it.
Anyway, happy spring! More to come.
Comments
Moral relativism and the lies we tell ourselves in the midst of horniness aside, this was INCREDIBLY HOT. In general, but maybe additionally for me specifically. This hit several of my more idiosyncratic kinks with such accuracy as to, midway through the story, have me wondering if I'd accidentally commissioned it. I *adore* MC stories where a protagonist can say something crude and have it received as a compliment, so this whole thing was perfect at that level. It slotted in alongside Fiend's Tongue and Faculty Meeting for me, two other gems in the micro-genre of Saying Things That Are Crass But Women Think They're Complimentary And Sexy And Then They Can't Stop Being Turned On By The Protagonist; still workshopping that descriptor. While there's for sure something funny about the hypocrisy of the Nice Guy being as greedy and selfish as the tacky creep (lower "c"), and some additional layers of commentary on how we process our kinks through the lens of society to the detriment of emotional honesty about our needs, again: just an INCREDIBLY HOT story. I love the return of sexy short stories with tons of funny degradation, alongside the longer stories of... uh, sexiness and humor and degradation. Great job!
WDB
2025-03-20 05:08:42 +0000 UTCHa ha, imagine enjoying the hotness of mind control while thinking of yourself as a good person! Hilarious! (GIF of Professor Farnsworth from Futurama saying "Oh, I made myself sad.")
WDB
2025-03-20 05:00:43 +0000 UTC
