Oopsie
Added 2019-01-11 20:11:54 +0000 UTCThat's the name of the story, not me apologizing for anything. This is the belated December monthly commission drawing (and props to the drawing winner for being so patient!).
I often compare writing on commission to doodling with crayons. Sometimes, you've got the lines all sketched out for you in the coloring book and you just pick a crayon color and fill it in. Other times, you've got a blank sheet of paper and the a world of possibility. Both have their fun sides. Usually, when people commission a story, I get the first one. The commissions aren't cheap, so people want to get what they want. They tend to be pretty specific - scene by scene walk-through, character names, descriptions, do's and don'ts. (Which is fine!)
This time around, the request was, if I may quote the drawing winner: "something with bimbos and a twist ending."
Ladies and gentlemen... I give you: Oopsie.
Going forward, I have one more commission I'm doing before beginning TIOS 3, and then I'll be doing kind of a chapter/commission back and forth until I get caught up. More to come!
Comments
Yeah, I try to keep character indictments of MCers from being over themes, but with a request for a twist, I thought it'd be fun to give a jerk his comeuppance. :D
Ice Bear
2019-01-16 10:20:03 +0000 UTCAdditionally, I'm not really big on bimbo transformation stories (not my kink), but it turns out I *am* big on bimbo transformation stories that are a stealth indictment of the ways men patronize and objectify attractive women. So, more of that, please.
WDB
2019-01-12 18:35:06 +0000 UTCHa ha ha, fantastic.
WDB
2019-01-11 22:26:17 +0000 UTCOh damn - loved the story, and that twist ending really knocked me for something. Great work!
JoeForest
2019-01-11 22:22:40 +0000 UTC
