Teaching Her A Lesson, Part 18
Added 2020-08-21 19:50:09 +0000 UTCWhew! Man, this one took me some doing before I got it like I wanted it. After leaving you with what seems to have been everyone's favorite twist, this chapter focuses pretty heavily on the addition of Tabitha Hutchings to the ensemble. I had a good idea who she was, but it took a lot of doing to get her to come across the way I wanted, so hopefully it worked out. We'll iron out the kinks as we move forward, but for now, here we go. Have a good weekend everybody. More to come!
Comments
Honestly, as a straight dude, I was not a fan of the addition of Justin as a sexual partner. When reading, I tend to enjoy putting myself in the eyes/view of the male protagonist/hero. The idea of Cannon/the reader getting a blowjob from a guy is kind of ...bleech....when throw in there without warning. It's one thing to see it coming and be able to skip past it in a story. It's another thing to be like HAHA, that thing you enjoyed earlier, guess was, plot twist, it was a dude. Ow Ow Ow wooooooooooooooo
C Hibbert
2020-08-29 18:11:54 +0000 UTCWell Tabitha is fun. As with most of the girls, I find myself imagining the character dynamics between Tabitha and her fellow slavegirls when Mr Canon isn't around. Strange friendships. I'm also quite curious what other programs Abbie has running in her head, whether she decided to extend "Abbie is the boss of me" to the rest of the gang.
R Masters
2020-08-26 20:24:15 +0000 UTC
