Writer poll (now with price)

So a writter offered themselves to write for the games I make. I would like to gather your opinion before making a decision (ultimately yours). 

They are asking for 1/4 of the patreon money (includes putting the writing in the game and bug fixing). Feel free to put your opinion in the comments. 

I leave the comparison of texts. 

In normal is what I wrote, in cursive and black is what they wrote. 

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As you land on the space, your brain seem to flash to a specific memory.

When your piece lands upon the space with the image of a bell, reality shifts and you become a passenger to something that is both your memory and someone else’s. 

You remember touring a milk factory. But in comparison to other factories, this one was not gray, but it was covered with wood all over. As you entered the factory, a strong smell of cedar struck your nose. The moving parts of the machines were mostly made out of wood.

To get out of the house, you decided to go to the local tour of a milk factory! Not the most exciting thing, though your expectations were quickly thrown out the window upon entering the wooden facility. What you anticipated to be sleek metallic walls was replaced with the scent of cedar wafting your nose; the tour guide mentioned at some point that even the components of the machines were wooden! How rustic.

What stood out the most were the cowpens. The cows were not clustered up together, but actually have ample room to move around. They had hay and even some live grass to chew. It even had a bed to sleep, although it looked more like a cushion, but some cows looked really well rested in those.

You’re shocked upon seeing the cowpens though. While the facility does have a pasture outside, the livestock were mostly confined to individualized rooms with ample living space. Each one contained not only the typical hay they chew, but a grassy area on which a large cushion resided, many of which were occupied by the residents who were sleeping peacefully on them.