A little feedback.
Added 2018-01-12 08:43:09 +0000 UTCHey there, my awesome patrons!!
I am hard at work on the the next pages of CAPTIVE CUCKOLD, HOSTILE TAKEOVER 2, MESSY BREAK-UP, the FINALE to DR. ONYX (...Thank God).
As I have been writing, I notice that I throw a lot of dialog in and crowd up the pages.
I have a question to ask:
Does the more I write on a page make the comic more erotic? Does it make you discover new stuff on the 2nd, 3rd or more readings?
I'd love to hear any personalized positive feedback. Be as detailed as you want... I'd love to know what YOU LOVE or what you feel I am doing RIGHT.
(I just got some reviews from a private custom and they hated EVERYTHING)
Please answer in the comments below.
Thank you for your time.
Comments
I think it would be cool if there were bonus annotations. Example: Jailbait, annotations and imitation document records on the characters, what did he do to deserve jail time. I am guessing it is a fake prison simply made to make the sissy more pliable submissive and effeminate. I heard some people ay they would love to see and read what happens next in Mostly Black College, maybe all of them get fucked side by side?
walakki
2018-01-13 09:13:57 +0000 UTCIf it's only a problem to sacrifice two or more panels in the story, it should be an equilibre between drawnings and words... If you read 'TWO OF A KIND' there's a need to see more action between bodies, maybe two more panels just to feel the action, even if the positions are quite the same... If you read a Throne story with only one image, it would be so nice to cancel dialogues and write the word 'SEE IMAGE' in the right part of the text.
Luca Sommesso
2018-01-12 21:44:27 +0000 UTC
