Our First comic Submission: Stock Crash

I will be holding a vote on these comics  later this spring and the one with the most votes we'll do.  If you plan on sending your submission in make sure to do it soon. Remember there are guidelines on this site.

-NO GLORIFIED SEXUAL VIOLENCE

-NO UNDERAGE CHARACTERS (18 years old)

-NO SCAT

-NO MUTILATION

-All sexual acts are Consensual

Here is the first submission.  Please be kind in the comments below, this is from one of your fellow patrons that worked really hard on the writing this. 

Title: Stock Crash

General concept: There's an APP tha rates people based off genetics, basically telling you straight up how much your worth as a mate. Characters who are already registered with the app (almost all) have a floating green number above them in the frames, visable only to the reader to signify what people can see people as if they check them on their phone.  Black guys are all muscular and Taller than the ladies and bigger dicked than the white guys. The white husbands are generally weedy and shorter than their wives. The relative app score values tend to follow these rules as well. There's some well traveled superior buisness boss cuck tropes in the story but the main theme is breeding rights and mate selection.

Cast

Main Character: Dawson Dickinson (formly mentioned in the script as Travis, just letting you know in case i missed a change)

(30yo)

5'3", Thin, Pale complextion, Brown Hair with a part, Blue Eyes, 3" Penis erect and circumcised. Is in denial of changing times because they don't suit him. Feels entitled to a high standing in society 

Dawson's Wife Dixie

(Mid 20's)

5'8", Pale blonde, blue eyes, G cup Breasts, Very Sexual, blunt about opinions, size queen, hedonist, Is in love with Dawson. Hourglass figure.

Xavier

(Early 30's)

6'7", Black Bull Build, calm and collected, Superman Build, Intelligent. Has cyber tattoos, such as barcodes and jagged lines like a computer circut. Dresses for buisness. Bald.

Dawson's Father Beau Dickinson

(late 50's)

4'8"

Short stocky man. Looks sort of like a short version of KFC's Colonel sanders, White hair, with a big southern Bushy Mustache and soul patch. Wears a monocle and walks around with a cane. Wears a Creame Tan suit and wide sun brimmed hat

Dawson's Step Mother Jolene

(mid 40's)

5'8"

Blone Hair, buxom southern Belle that wears big puffy dresses. Married into the family for money and often gives suspecious lustful side glances to the black muscular staff. Like to hold a parasol out in the sun, and a hand fan for inside. 

Xavier's girlfriend Shaundi (Genstock score of 9009)

(Mid 20's)

Busty hourglass figure black woman. Very Beyonce-esqe

Xavier's other girlfriend: Rachel (Genstock score of 8820)

(early 20's)

Busty hourglass figure. Red hair, green eyes. Very jessica rabbit-esqe

Dixie's best friend Betty (Genstock score 8270)

(late 20's)

Short black hair. Double D breasts. Is from a rich family. Very confident in her sexuality. Knows what she wants and take what she wants.

Dixie's friend Katie (GenStock score of 7610)

(Mid 20's)

C cup. pretty big butt. Persian. Long flowing black hair.

Dixie's friend Stacy (Genstock score of 7980)

(Mid 20's)

DD cup. Strawberry blonde. Hazel eyes.

Betty's husband Kim

(Early 30's)

Sissy. Anxious.

Katie's husband Wallace

(Mid 30's)

Brown hair, looks like the type of guy to smoke a pipe.

Stacy's husband Dave

(late 20's)

Blonde hair, blue eyes. Enjoys the cuckold lifestyle and embraces being a cuck.

Page 1 panel 1

The shape of a couple making love on a bed is silhouetted by the tv light. The Busty Woman Lays on her back with her legs open and bent. The couples foreheads are touching as their eyes are locked in love. A sound can be heard as their hips meet. A vanity table and chair sit against the wall.

Tv Reporter: The GenStock app controversy continues as it breaks records for downloads. Many question it's reliability and effect on western society. The app not only give you a stock score based on your genetics for mate seeking purposes but also doubles as a dating app to help singles meet.

Dawson: I'm almost there honey!

Dixie: That's a good boy, breed me honey!

Dawson: I'm gonna knock you Uuuuuuugnhf

Panel 2

Dixie is holding her hips up in the air in the conception position to make sure gravity pulls the sperm in. Dawson is now sitting up on the side of the bed watching TV with a concerned look.

Dawson: This degenerate GenStock app is going to ruin society. Everyone is jumping on to match up with people based on a number. It only rates people by desirable genetic traits. Who gets to determine which traits are desirable?

Dixie: That's a bit of an over reaction. I'm sure people are just using it as a factor in a broader descision. To be honest genetics have always been on a girls mind, it was a bit of a guessing game before. Now it's simply more transparent.

Dawson: There's so much more to a suitable partner than genetics, there's education, morals, culture, financial

security and most importantly love. I'm so glad we met before this app came out and ruined dating.

Panel 3

Dixie and Dawson are both in the bathroom, Dixie is looking at a pregnancy test stick. There's a mirror above the toilet and a clock next to that.

Dixie: God Darn it! Still Negative. This aint fair! I want to be a mother.

Dawson: But the ovulation test said you were at your peak. My Father isn't going to like this.

Dixie: Honey bear, what if something is wrong? I think I should go to that prepared parenthood clinic, maybe they

can help?

Dawson: Didn't the state shut those down?

Dixie: There's still one up north. But It'll be a trip and a half, sorry I'll have to miss high tea with your daddy.

Dawson: Liar, you just don't want to put up with his racist rants, I can deal with him, but I was hoping for some backup with my step mom. You be safe dear.

Panel 4

Dawson walks up a long driveway to a big white plantation with willow oaks around the field. Old money is evident

Caption: Dawson' family, the Dickinsons was very wealthy. Their wealth dated back to the confederacy when they owned multiple cotton plantations. In modern times they own a telecommunications company. 

page 2, panel 1

Dawson, Jolene and Baeu are sitting at a long vintage table. Around them Strong black security guards in sutis and glasses, pirvate security, as well as a tall black butler serving drinks with a long dick outline in his pants that Jolene is eyeing voraciously whilst cooling her blushing self with a hand fan. 

Baeu: Son, need I remind you that after your former sister and brothers failure to maintain, errm, social integrity

that the Dickinson name and reputation is left up to you to continue on. Think of all the adversities our ancestors had to triumph over to get us here, It would be a shame upon the world to see such apex genetics go to waste.

Dawson: Dad Belle and Hank are still your children

Baeu: Poppicock! Aint no kids of mine running off with urban fellas. Besides, it just means you get to inherit the

entire Dickinson fortune, but only if you produce an heir! I know you love Dixie but if she's infertile, heavens forbid,

 you may have to get a divorce.

Jolene: Nonsense Baeu bear, let the boy be with who he wants, it's not so bad if we keep the money between us is it?

Dawson: Nice try Jolene but we are having a baby and that's that. Now dad about the CEO-

Baeu: Not this again, the company's gone public son, it's up to the board who gets it. But I hear you are top of

the list

Panel 2

Dixie's serving a roast turkey onto the table in front of Dawson. A green number floats above Dixie's head, only visable to the reader. 9358.

Dixie: Good and bad news. As it turns out, I'm perfectly capable of having children.

Dawson: That's great! And the bad news?

Dixie: I'm hyper fertile, there's a 40% chance of having quadruplets, a 30% chance of having sixtuplets  and 20% chance of octuplets

Dawson: what! How have we not concieved at all yet?

Dixie: The doctor thinks it has something to do with you dear.

Dawson: oh... right... well they announce the new CEO tommorow afternoon, I can sneak away to the clinic beforehand.

Dixie: One more thing. Apprently, the clinic automatically does a GenStock appraisal with the tests.

Dawson: How the hell does that dam company keep getting it's fingers in everything? Who the hell is running it?

Just ignore it sweetie, those things are notroiously-

Dixie: I scored 9358

Dawson: -ACCURATE! Because of course my wife is a catch. Just wait until the boys at work hear about this. They've

been boasting about their wives in the 7000's, this oughta wipe the smugness from their faces. I mean if you scored

that high I must be over 10,000! Combine that with the new CEO position I'll get tomorrow and we'll be a power couple.

Panel 3

Dixie is now giving Dawson a hand job, with a greased up condom. Her eyes are seductive and controlling, Dawsons' face looks like he can barly remember his name, vaguley staring at the one breast Dixie has let fall out to hypnotise

him.

Dixie: I'm so excited, promise me we'll go Jacuzi shopping on the weekend, oooh and a new laborghuini!

Dawson: yes dear, what ever you heart desires!

Dixie: Good boy, now cum for me into the condom, I'm inseminating myself with the turkey baster tonight so I can get a deeper deposit.

Panel 4

At prepared parenthood, a pretty doctor is looking into a microscope. A Genstock score of 6388 is sitting above her head.

Doctor: You sperm count appears low, in addition a lot of them have double tails, which gives them poor propulsion. Additionally your cum is very watery, you'll have to tell her to stay in conception position for several hours post intercourse. Your reduced girth from your circumcision in addition to your short length means it will be harder for your partner to achieve orgasm, which is important as the muscles contract upwards sucking the sperm into the uterus

Tell me, how often do you cum?

Dawson: Well, twice a day. I masterbate before I leave work and then have sex with my wife.

Doctor: Why would you masterbate before you leave work?

Dawson: Well, I have trouble lasting more than a minute if I don't, if I masterbate before sex then I can last 3-5 minutes.

Doctor: No wonder you are having trouble concieving. You only save up enough sperm for a day and then you flush it down the toilet before you can put it in your wife. Your almost firing blanks on top of the other issues I mentioned.

Dawson: Oh darn, when you put it that way it makes a lot of sense.

Doctor: My Advice, only ejaculate at most, once a week into her. If you have trouble with impulse control, you may want to consider a chastity device. 

Page 3, Panel 1

Doctor is now looking at her computer screen. A Genstock score now floats above Dawsons' head as well as the doctors.

Doctor: Your GenStock results are in, you're at 2780

Dawson: That's impossible! My wife's 9358

Doctor: Congradulations, you are batting waaay out of your league.  Are you two in a monogomous relationship?

Dawson: Well yes.

Doctor: My apologies. *Click click*. There you go, your stock results average at 6069, which will be the predicted average estimate for your children.

Dawson: What a bunch of balony! Are you saying I'm not good enough for my wife?

Doctor: Technically the computer is. The GenStock algorithm was formulated by the top geneticists in the nation.

Panel 2

Dixie is sitting at a cafe with three of her friends, eyes on her phone, sex and the city style. Her friends are all knock outs. Betty's score is 8270, Katie's score is 7610, Stacy's is 7980. These scores stay above the characters heads for the remainder of the comic. 

Katie: 9358! I'd cheer you on if I wasn't so Jelous. Your kids will be set.

Dixie: What do you mean?

Betty: You Haven't heard? Schools are starting to accept people based on GenStock scores rather than test results. They want to eliminate privlige and they say the best way to measure talent is with a GenStock score. 

Dixie: What the hell, my score just dropped to 6069!

Stacy: Then your husband must of just recieved his results, they average out monogomos couples scores. You're out of the dating pool and thus out of the genetic stock market. So the score changes to show you as a couple, to predict your kids score.

Betty: As a result, a lot of people are changing their relationship structure to be non monogomous. Society is changing Dixie, don't fall behind.

Dixie: I can't believe he's so low. I know he isn't built well but he's very high up at his company, you don't get that far without talent right? I mean I'd assume his brain alone for a position like that would at least net him 5000.

Stacy: Didn't his dear Daddy get him that job though? Nepotism is alive and well.

Katie: Dixie, I can't believe you carry so many fertile eggs. couldn't that ruin your body?

Dixie: I hadn't thought of it like that.

Katie: he better be giving you some big vaginal orgasms to make up for having that many kids at such a compromised GenStock score.

Dixie: He's never given me a Vaginal Orgasm before. I don't think I can even have one. But he's really good at stimulating my clit when he goes down on me.

Stacy: Wait what?!? He's the only guy you've been with and you've never gotten a V-Gasm?

Katie: Of course you can have a V-Gasm, and what if you're a V-gasm focused girl? You'll be missing out one the most blissful part of your life. I can have V-gasms, but my biggest are anal gasms.

Betty: Why did you think she would be having V-Gasms when she's told you how little Dawson's willy is.

Dixie: Darn, you're making me have second thoughts. What if I'm rushing into kids?

Betty: It's settled, tell Dawson you demand to open up the relationship. Then come with us for our swing events. You can try new sex and your scores will split again, two men one stone.

Dixie: What if he falls for another girl?

Betty: With Dawson's low score, he'll be lucky if he brings back anyone, let alone anyone that would compare to you.

Dixie: The clinic did give me free contraception pills, maybe I should use them until I'm sure.

Panel 3

Many men in suits sit at a table in a board room. Beau Dickinson sits at the head with Dawson next to him. Most of the Characters are shadows. At the other end of the table sits a stern woman with a GenStock score of 4402.

Woman: After much discussion with the board, we've factored in your financial successes as well you GenStock score

Dawson: Wait what, Genstock score?

Woman: and we are pleased to announce that the new CEO of Dickinson Communications will be Xavier Blackwood, the head of our newly aquired social app subsidery. 

Dawson: Malarky! I've been with this company for years and your promoting someone who just joined the company through aquisition?

Panel 4

Looking down the table at the other end next to the woman Xavier leans forward into view with A Genstock score of 12690

Xavier: and during that time your ventures have broken even at best. You've contributed no growth to the company. Meanwhile I built my company up from my garage and devloped the GenStock app that's quickly becoming integral and a must have to society. If you want to rise in this company, I suggest you work harder and earn it.

Panel 5

out in the hallway.

Dawson: I'm sorry about my outburst. That was unprofetional of me.

Xavier: Yes it was, jelousy does not suit you. You can make it up to me by bringing your wife and yourself to a dinner at mine tonight. I want to get to know the people working under me. 7 o Clock, don't be late.

Page 4, panel 1

Dixie is sitting on the bed at home, naked. Phone in one hand and a boxed big black cock dildo in the other hand. Her eyes are fixated on the new toy. Shopping bags on the floor. Face blushing at the thought.

Dawson: Umm, honey, don't be upset. But the clinic said I had a low sperm count.

Dixie: Ok? Does this mean we can't have babies?

Dawson: Yes we can, but I can only have sex with you once a week.

Dixie: Oh! I mean, oooh no. Well I suppose maybe, we could get a toy dildo or something for you to use on me to make up for it.

Dawson: Eerm, I guess we could try that. Also, I'm sorry but I didn't get the CEO position.

Dixie: WHAT!

Dawson: I'm sorry honey, I'll get it one day, we may just have to be a bit more patient. Don't be mad. Also, we have to go have dinner with my new boss tonight.

Panel 2

The dildo is suctioned to the chair, Dixie straddles the chair backwards, movement lines can be seen of her going up and down on the dildo. In the vanity mirror you can see her tits overflowing on the back rest support and an Orgasmic face with stars in her eyes. Her juices are leaking all over the dildo and seat, in addition she squirts everywhere for the first time.

Dixie: Screw this, Life's too short to waste on worrying about the jelousy of a middle managment under achiever with a Genstock score under 5000.

Dixie: Oh boy, maybe this was too big, no, don't back out now.

Dixie: Oh my lord this hurts, but also, it feels great.

Dixie: So Full, must, fit, all of it.

Dixie: That's it! Let's show it how a real gal rides the bull.

Dixie: oh my god. 

Dixie: Oh my god!

Dixie: OH MY GOD!

Dixie: Holy shiii- UUUUGNMMMMMMPHF

Dixie: wow, what the hell was that? Did I piss myself? *sniffs* it doesn't smell like urine. Better ask the girls.

Panel 3

Inside Xaviers house, Dawson and Dixie sit at the dinner table with Xavier at the head and a glass of red wine for each person Opposite. Opposite Dixie and Dawson sit Shaundi and Rachel. Everyone has thier GenStock scores floating above their head as usual, including Dawsons and Dixies compromised score the style of the house is very modern, almost a cyber punk feel with new money in stark contrast to the vintage old money feel of the Dickinson family. 

Dawson: So you made the GenStock app?

Xavier: Well I had a team of programmers and geneticists working for me but yes the project was my baby.

Dixie: That's very impressive Mr Blackwood

Xavier: Please Dixie caller me Xavier

Dixie: what's your relation to Xavier?

Shaundi: we're his girlfriends.

Rachel: GenStock is showing people the benefits of non monogomous relationships. Usually this takes the form of polyamoury, that way the time you spit between your partners isn't starving them for attention if they also have other partners they focus that attention on.

Shaundi: But Xavier hates sharing his girls. A tough choice between having two Beta Alpha's or a single Alpha Alpha. Ultimatly Xavier proved worth it.

Dawson: So you're his Harem concubines.

Rachel: and proud of it.

Dixie: Are there any ways to change your GenStock score?

Xavier: Other than monogomous status? Well yes, calculations do take into effect more than just your genetics. Wealth is a factor, it's important to be able to nourish your children to an extent and safe gaurd medical bills. But there's a sharp drop off around a middle class income level, you won't find much difference between millionaires and billionaires. For men, matching with women for hook ups but not getting repeat visits can slightly reduce your score whilst the more repeat offers you get, the more your score goes up. It still won't make up the bulk of your score, not to boast but it

adds an extra 5% to my rating. Repeat offers are the closet way we can measure female orgams, which is important for concieving.

Dawson: Degeneracy! If you want the best sex you save yourself for marriage, you'll never beat your first time on your wedding night.

Panel 4

Xavier, Rachel and Shaundi are laughing, Rachel almost spilling her wine. Dixie is blushing and lost in thought. Travis is visibly annoyed.

Xavier: Sorry sport, that's now how experience works. No persons best time playing basketball was their first time playing basketball. Do you really believe that the pros get worse as they practice? Practice improves any skill, and make no mistake sex is a skill, some people are more gifted but everyone can improve with practice. 

Dixie thought bubble: That actually makes a lot of sense

Dixie: So Mr Blackwood, what's your Genstock score then?

Xavier: 12690

Dawson: That's fake and infalted. You created the program, you can write what ever you want.

Xavier: Do I LOOK like I need to cheat?

Page 5 Panel 1

Dawson and Dixie are in the bathroom again looking at a pregnancy test, Dixie wearing daisy dukes and a confederate flag tshirt

Caption: The following month

Dixie: Oh darn, negative again. You've been holding back like you said you would right?

Dawson: umm, well, about that. I may have touched myself once or twice.

Dixie: Well that explains it. I think it's time for that doctors suggestion snd get a chastity cage. Better

hold you back two weeks at a time, to be sure.

Panel 2

A zoom in on the bathroom bin, as the pregnancy test falls in, an empty box for contraceptive pills can also be seen. Dixie is using the pills but letting Dawson continue to think it's his fault.

Panel 3

By the pool in revealing swimmers. Dawson is reading the paper, Dixie is oiled up in a skimpy bikini Sunbathing,

key necklace around her neck.

Dawson: I can't believe they considered my GenStock score for the CEO Position. You used to have to earn your job.

Dixie: Didn't your dad just give you your job?

Dawson: I can't help wonder if I just had a slightly higher rating that I could have gotten that job.

Dixie: Remember Xavier said if guys land a lot of chicks who keep coming back for more their rating goes up.

Dawson: So what? Wait, are you suggesting we open up our relationship? Won't you be jelous?

Panel 4

Dixie has pulled down Dawson' swimmers, exposing his small caged Penis, she massages his balls, he strains in his cage with a pleasurable and painful trance on his face, facing the direction of one tit Dixie has exposed, she has a smug expression on her face knowing she's playing him like a puppet.

Dixie: Honey you know I'd do anything for you. I would have to go on the pill as they don't let single males

participate in my friends swing parties.

Dawson: What if it ruins our relationship? Oh helloooO, Nggrhh mphf

Dixie: Baby our bond is unbreakable isn't it? We're soul mates after all. Besides, wouldn't you just looove to empty that full acheing load inside some other hotties?

Dawson: Ye-yeah, yes dear.

Dixie: Just name drop your great great great grandfather who lead that southern army to victory in the civil war. Gals love that story.

Page 6: Panel 1

Dawson is at his office with hearphones on.

Caption: The next day

Headphone Audio: The art of picking up women, step 1.

Panel 2:

Dixie is at home on the sofa with a new, even bigger dildo, watching interracial porn masterbating herself silly with eyes glued to the screen.

Dixie thought bubble: Why is it when I search pornhub for 'GenStock score over 9000' it's almost exclusivly

black guys?

Panel 3

Dawson is getting ready for the swing party, in the bathroom, slicking his hair back with a shine in his teeth.

Caption: The next weekend

Dawson thought bubble: With a rating of 6069 and my winning Charisma I'll impress the ladies easily.

Panel 4

Dixie is in front of her vanity mirror slathering on red lipstick and wearing provocative makeup. She's wearing a scandalous red dress and thigh high stocking with suspenders and tall "fuck me" pumps.

Page 7 panel 1

Dixie and her friends stand around a classy lounge with their husbands, all short weedy white guys except for Betty's

who looks like a pretty girl, strangly, with a 0 GenStock score. The walls are adorned with confederate memorabillia,

Betty is standing addressing the room.

Betty: For the new, unlike regular swing parties where the more attractive partner usually has to take one for

the team, we go out to bars and clubs and attract a third party to bring back to the estate. Boys get to try first.

Panel 2 and 3

A panel split down the middle. On the left the ladies are in the open loungeroom watching observing the tv with a drink in their hands. Dixie has her phone in her other hand with an angry look on her face. On the right panel is Dawson through a security camera lens behind the bar chatting up a faded ghost with speed lines diverting her (her score being 6100) attention to a tall thin black man with a higher Gen stock rating (7212). Dawson's score has fallen back to his solo score (2780)with a down arrow next to it.

Betty: I sweet talked the bar owner into letting us connect into their security camera feed.

Stacy: Dixie have you registered your relationship as open on the GenStock app yet?

Dixie: Well I thought I'd wait till the boys were done to keep Dawson's score up.

Dawson: Yeah so I just became the CEO of a corporation. To celerbrate I told my wife how it was going to be from

now on and that we'd have an open relationship. My GenStock rating is higher than hers but I keep the relationship

registered as monogomous to help her out.

Dixie: On Second thought, transparency is a virtue. Open relationship registered.

Bar girl now facing the tall black guy: Hi Handsome wanna buy a lonely lady a drink?

Panel 4:

a cross section view, on the left you can see the end of a hallway. Betty is locking the door with a key. In most of the frame is a room with game hunt trophy heads along the wall. 4 comfy recliner seats face the reader with side tables. On each of them is a bottle of lube, a flesh light with a fake pussy mold, a vibrating butt plug and a big black dildo. A translucent tv screen is between the reader and the chairs. Kim with a red 0 score if pacing nervously. Dave is eagerly watching the screen in anticipation. Wallace is talking to Dawson with brandy in his hand but Dawson's eyes are distracted by the door locking sound.

Dave: I love that you have cameras around the house that feed back to this tv. I wonder what the girls will dare do this time.

Dawson: Wait, did no one manage to bring girls back from the bar?

Kim: We've hardley ever managed to bring back any lady over a GenStock score of 1500. The ones that we did never

registered any follow up interest and our rating fell a little.

Kim: The app is rigged I say.

Wallace: Nonsense, woman have always dated up. A prince marrying a peasant has always been less scanalous than a princess doing so. It's just more visible now.

Kim: I meant that black people seem to always get really high scores.

Dawson: Interesting observation...

Dave: But unsurprising, look at the NBA, the NFL, Atheletics, the top athletes are always black guys.

Dawson: hey why is a lady in here, what happened to Betty's husband?

Kim: I AM Betty's husband, at least I used to be. She felt it would be easier to pick up studs at the bar if she looked more availible. So bit by bit she started feminising me. At first she started introducing me as her gay friend, then her best girlfriend, then she started me on the estrogen pills. She gave me an ultimatum she knew I couldn't say no too. She had all the money after all. I indulged her in her ball busting fetish, and now my sperm count is zero, thus my GenStock score is 0. Now I'm in an even worse position to leave, I'm screwed if she gets bored of me. What is she leaves me for one of the guys she brings home?

Page 8, Panel 1

At an "urban" club, everyone has a Genstock score above them. Dixies friends are having a good time. Betty's dirty

dancing with two black men on the dance floor, The other two are getting chatted up by guys at the bar. Dixie sits

alone at the end of the bar looking nervous and unsure of herself. Someone off frame behind her talks

Stranger: Well look who went back on the markets

Panel 2

Back in the boys room, but they are all sitting down glued to the tv

dave: here they are

Wallace: the men are even taller than last time

Kim: wait, did Betty bring back two guys this time? That slut.

Dawson: what the hell is HE doing here?!?!

Panel 3

The girls take places around the spacious lounge room, swooning at the men. The men are all black with high scores than their partners, Xaviers is the highest Betty leads both of her men by the hands. Dixie is lead by Xaviers confident strut.

panel 4

Close up of Dixie on her knees in front of Xaviers crotch with a big thick outline of his cock. Pupils are dilated. Her heart is pounding.

Page 9 Panel 1

Dixie is in the foreground, sucking on Xaviers big balls in a lust haze, a semi erect cock resting over her entire face. In

the back ground, Betty is sucking one dick whilst jerking off the other. Stacy is licking the guys ass. Katie is riding her bull cowgirl.

Xavier: How do my balls taste?

Dixie: Mmmm like chocolate Candy

panel 2

Back in the boys room. Dave is enthusiatically stroking. Wallace is pumping the lube bottle into his hands with tent in his pants getting ready with an anxious looks on his face. Kim is sucking on one of the dildos with one hand, causing a lump in his cheek, and using a vibrator in his ass with the other hand. Dawson is trying to pull the door open.

Dawson: This was a mistake! let me out of this prison.

Kim: Don't kid yourself, this is a baby sitting lounge. It's too late now.

Dave: They always try to break out the first time.

Wallace: you may find it easier to masterbate if you focus on the couples who aren't your wife.

Panel 3

Back in the lounge room Dixie is trying to fit Xaviers dick down her mouth. Betty is getting spit roasted like a turkey. Stacy is slapping her face with the dick, Katie is getting her ass reamed in doggy position.

Panel 4

Dixie is on her back, hearts in her eyes. Xavier is still standing pounding Dixie's pussy. The other girls are in various

sumissive positions, artists choice.

Panel 5

Dawson is sitting back down, looking more intrigued/concerned, Dave is cumming all over himself.

Panel 6

Back in the lounge room everyone starts orgasiming. Juices are squirting out of Dixie. A mini panel shows Dawson's hand reach for the fleshlight.

Dixie: IT'S SO BIG! Harder, HARDER! oh my God, my pussy is yoouuurs ooohahhhhhng

Page 10 Panel 1

Kim and Wallace are cumming all over themselves and even Dawson (who has a horrified look on his face) is cumming into the flesh light. Betty and Dixie walk through the door, catching them in the act with a beaming smiles. 

Betty: By the way I put your feed on a twenty minute delay.

Dawson: Dixie, this isn't what it looks like.

Dixie: Yes it is and it's ok. I'm just glad y'all enoying yourselves as much as we did. In fact that may be the last pussy you get to cum in. But... we can't go back to the way things were... I can't... so, we need to seal your new place in this relationship.

Panel 2

Dawson has been flipped back on his recliner, Dixie has straddled the now flat chair and has sat on his face, holding him in place by his hair, making him eat his cream pie. 

Dixie: Good news, Xavier has said I can join his Harem! But he doesn't like to share his women. Hey! did I say you could stop licking? As I was saying, Xavier has room for two more girls. So Betty suggested you get her husbands treatment.

Panel 3

Dawson is looking up at a grinning Xavier. His semi erect cream covered cock in front of Dawson's face. Betty is on one side of Xavier looking down, placing a pink pill on Xaviers cock. Dixie is on Xaviers other side.

Betty: This is an estrogen pill, I make my husband take them.

Xavier: I'll need a gesture of commitment. Clean my dick and swallow that pill.

Dixie: Baby you'll make me so happy. His member is super tasty. You'll learn to love it in no time.

Dawson: I don't want this. I just want things to go back to normal.

Dixie: I'm sorry but that's not happening. I'm not letting you bring down my Gen Stock value and I can't have kids with such a low rated male. But I'm not giving up on you that easily. The sooner you swallow your pride by swallowing him, the sooner we can start our new life together.

Panel 4

Dawson, eyes closed in defeat has Xaviers penis down his throat, past the point of the pill, the outline of Xaviers dick can be seen in Dawson's throat. A lot of cream has smeared around his mouth, dripping off his chin. A tear rolls down Dawson's cheek.

Betty: Alright, enough fun, girls, time to lock our husbands back in chastity.

Page 11

A cross section of Dawson's house. A lot of time takes place, the only indicator of time is passing is the feminization of Dawson. The time jumps arn't sequential between rooms so the reader can have some fun figuring out what rooms are in what order. In the Bedroom Xavier has Dixie pinned against the wall banging and moaning together. On the other side of the same wall is Dawson in the guest bed with a pillow over his ears trying to muffle the sound. In the Kitchen, Dawson's hair is a bit longer, He's in a french maid outfit cleaning the Dishes. Xavier is fucking Dixie wearing her confederate flag T shirt on the kitchen bench opposite Dawson. In the pool table room, Dixie is sitting on the edge of the table with a cream pied pussy, Dawson is on his knees about to clean it up, now with shoulder length hair and B cup tits. Xavier is lining up his shot, pants still off and dick still dirty. In the bathroom Dixie is taking a bubble bath enjoying the submissive sight of Dawson, who is on his knees, longer hair and C cup tits and wearing a pretty summer dress, gobbling Xaviers cock whilst Xavier brushes his teeth. Out by the pool Dawson is wearing a bikini, D cup serving drinks to both Xavier and Dixie. Xavier spanks travis causing a shocked face. In the lounge room Xavier is watching the TV, Travis now in full G cup Sissy Bimbo mode with whore makeup, pink boob tube and pink miniskirt and is sitting on the floor with Dixie worshipping Xaviers cock and balls.

Captions: At first, Dawson hated his new life. Dawson would clean around the house, Xavier would fuck Dixie around the house. Dawson would fill Dixie's wallet, Xavier would fill Dixie's pussy. Dawson would move to the guest room when ever he stayed the night. Dawson would buy sexy clothes for Dixie that she'd only ever wear for Xavier then Dawson would buy a second outfit for himself to hold his ever expanding breasts. Eventually, Dawson got used to things, even grew fond of his role. Perhaps something was always in him that got awaked, perhaps it was the drugs, Xavier looked more attractive by the week. Unbeknownst to Dawson, his point of no return hadn't actually arrived, until now. 

Page 12 Panel 1

Dawson is in the walk in wardraobe in a maid outfit, scrubbin Dixie's heels. A caption points to the clothes on the right saying Dixie's clothes, very slutty and whorish. A caption on the left says Dawson's clothes, which are now all womans clothes, styles that are very girly and emasculating. Dixie stands at the door excited with news.

Dixie: Honey great news! We're going to have a baby!

Dawson: But I haven't been inside you in 2 years- oh, you mean with Xavier.

Dixie: We're going to start trying this weekend. But, there's one condition. You need a snip snip.

Dawson: What!?!? But I always thought that maybe one day, after you finished breeding with Xavier of course, that maybe we could have a child.

Dixie: No, I don't want children with you anymore.

Dawson: but if we did I could inherit my father's fortune.

Dixie: We don't need it. We're moving in with Xavier and the girls. He has all the money we need.

Panel 2

Xavier's getting out of bed and Dawson can't help but stare and bite his lip. Dixie notices with a mischievous grin.

Dixie: Oh sweety, that's right, this is your last chance to masterbate isn't it? How about I unlock you. But you'll have to

make a choice. You can masterbate and jerk your seed into a tissue, or...

Panel 3

a close up rear view of Xavier's ass, one of his legs is up on the bed so that his half erect cock and balls are dangling in

view. Travis is in a trance licking and making out with Xavier's asshole whilst Dawson's hands fondle Xavier's balls and stroke the shaft. Xavier is ejaculating thick ropes of cum, making a mess.

Dixie speech bubble from off screen: or you could use your last chance jerking HIM off instead! Wouldn't that be so much better? Yes, I thought you'd agree.

Dawson: mmmmphfff

Xavier: Oh hell you're getting good at that. Nngh!

Panel 4

Dawson is looking in the mirror at his now useless flap of empty skin where his balls used to be with a remourseful

expression. Xavier and Dixie are either side looking pleased and smug. Dawson is all dolled up in pretty laungerie,

makeup and hair. His panties are around his thighs. A new chastity cage adorns his penis which has a second lock that

 attaches to a ring peircing that goes through his ballsack.

Caption: The weekend

Dawson: I don't understand, if my balls are gone, shouldn't my GenStock rating have been reduced to 0?

Xavier: Almost, the way the Doctor explained it, the ammo clips been taken out but there's still a round left in the chamber, from the last two years you've built up whilst locked.

Dawson: So there's still a chance I could have children one day?

Xavier: One chance, one big potent load of a chance. Maybe even with Dixie.

Dawson: What?

Dixie: What?

Xavier: I'm proud of how far Dawson has come, I feel we should reward him with an opportunity. I propose a challenge. One way or another Dixie is getting knocked up today. Dawson, go throw Dixie's contraceptive pills down the toilet. 

Page 13

Panel 1

The viewer is looking up out through the toilet bowel, Dawson is looking down into it, all the pills falling off of his hand.

A blank stare across his face as the gravity of the situation catches up to him. This is really happening.

Xavier: Now here's the challenge. *Xavier slams Dawson against the mirror on the wall above the toilet*. I'm going to fuck your juicy ass hole and if you don't cum in 3 minutes, which is about as much time as you used to give Dixie to cum, then you can fill Dixie up and be blessed with a litter of Dawson juniors. If you lose, your new name is Daisy.

Panel 2

Dawson is bent over the open toilet, hands either side of the mirror on the wall as he stares himself down in grim determination, Dawson's reflection shows a face in vulnerable bashful bliss, biting it's lower lip. Xavier is pounding away at Dawson's big juicy round ass like crazy, also wearing a condom. Dixie is behind them in the door frame filming the event with her phone with a sultry hot and bothered look on her face. One of Dawson's big G cup tits has wobbled out of his bra. Xavier is watching the analoge clock on the wall.

Xavier: That's one minute down, two long minutes to go.

Dixie thought bubble: Uh oh, if that were me I would have cum by now, maybe he can actually do this.

Dixie: Don't fight it Dawson, deep down, you know removing yourself from the gene pool is what's best for the world.

Dawson thought Bubble: You got this, don't cum, don't cum, don't cum.

Dawson reflection speech bubble: Holy fuck this hurts so good.

Dixie: You'll be much happier as a wet nurse for Xavier's babies, you were always only suited to be a provider.

Dawson thought bubble: For once in your god darn life Dawson, don't come second.

Dawson Mirror thought bubble: That's right cum first

Dawson thought bubble: That's righ- no don't cum at all, that's a trick!

Dixie: What would your great great grandfather think if he knew he'd die fighting the north only to have his decendant become a pretty no balls, small dicked sissy faggot that loved watching his white wife get bred by their black master.

Xavier: 1 minute left to go!

Dawson Reflection Speech Bubble: HARDER! FASTER!

Dawson thought bubble: Maybe if I ride the edge a bit, as long as I don't let myself go over.

Dixie: Remember WHY you are the last one on your fathers list eligible for the inheritance. Your mother left him for a black man,your sister succumbed to a black man, your brother turned, for a black man. Your father secretly sucks off black men, probably. All that's left to complete the royal FLUSH is you!

Xavier: 30 seconds

Dawson thought bubble: that baby and inheritance is my last chance off this ride.

Dawson Reflection speech bubble: I don't want the ride to ever end

Dixie: All the predators your ancestors fought off, all the prey they killed, all the courtships they won, to hopefully pass on their best genetics to you, just to end here, at a dead end, flushed down the toilet.

Xavier: 10 seconds

Panel 3

Same scenario, but a surprisingly huge load of jizz is streaming out of Dawson's locked dick. Ropes of cum cover the toilet bowl. Dawson has an exhausted and surprised O face, his reflection has a gleeful O face. A little bubble showing Dawson's brain popping. Xavier cumming into his condom O face. Dixie's juices sliding down her legs, glistning. The GenStock score above Dawson's head is a red 0 with a down arrow. 

Dawson thought bubble: Just a little longer,

Xavier: 9

Dawson Reflection speech bubble: I love you daddy!

Xavier: 8

Dixie: Daddy? Funny you should use that word, I'm filming this moment for your father. It'll break his heart to hear you

 call someone else daddy. He'll wonder how many other men you've called daddy. Now cum for him and show him the proud little faggot his first born has become. 

Xavier:7

Dixie: At least your father can't deny your living up to the family name at least, Xavier's putting the Dick in the Dickinsons Son.

Dawson thought bubble: no

Dawson reflection speech bubble: yes

Xavier: 6

Dixie: Don't fight it, give in.

Xavier: Fuck it I'm going to cum. Cum with me Daisy.

Dawson thought bubble: NO

Dawson reflection Speech bubble: oh YES!

Xavier: 5

Dawson: NOooohhhh my Yeeeees nnnggh (cums)

Dixie: Pathetic.

Xavier: I guess I win

Panel 4

A mini panel showing Dixie's hand dropping the chastity keys into the toilet that's filled with cum and contraceptive pills.

In the main frame, Dixie's flushing the toilet smiling gleefully as tears and eye liner stream down Dawson's face as he stares at the toilet. Xavier is tieing his very filled large used condom around Travis' penis, the cum bag mockingly dangling where Travis cum factories used to be.

Dixie: Flush flush!

Page 14, Panel 1

Dawson is sitting back on the bed with Dixie laying on him, legs wide open, ankles behind her ears, being helpfully held by Dawson. Xavier is fucking Dixie's pussy. Dawson looks happy, excited, accepting of his place now. Dixie is moaning, squirting. Xavier is about to bust his load. 

Dixie: Breed me daddy!

Dawson: Breed her daddy!

Xavier: Here it cums!

Mini panel with Xaviers dick balls deep in her pussy and cum leaking out

Dawson: make it nice and deep.

Panel 2

Dixie is on the bed as her body is lifted up, her legs folded over Dawson's shoulders as Dawson helps hold her in a concieving position. They smile at each other, one hand each together, fingers interlocked. Dawson is unwrapping Xaviers condom from his penis, and Dawson's tits are nice and squeezedon display between Dixie's legs.

Panel 3

On the left is a mini panel box, A close up of Dixie's face looking up at Dawson, smiling. Meanwhile Dawson is looking down at Dixie as he pours the contents of the condom down into her vagina, just to make sure she's pregnant.

Dixie: You know I love you right.

Dawson: That means a lot. You're my world. I love you too. Now, I'll just add this to be sure you become a mommy.

Panel 4

Out by the pool Dixie and Xaviers two other girls are relaxing in the sun, wearing sun glases and drinking lemon juice,

 their boobs are hooked up to a milk pumping machine. Shaundi is quite pregnant, Rachel only slightly. In windows

behind them, Dawson can be seen dealing with 8 cots of crying babies, two milk bottles in his hands, tits out and leaking milk of his own. His nipples are red and tender.

Dawson: Ladies, are you almost done with the next batch? All 8 of Dixie's boys are still hungry and I'm running dry.

Page 15 Panel 1

Baeu is sitting out on the porch, his phone buzzes
Panel 2
Baeu's face is red with shock and anger, seeing the video Dixie sent him
Panel 3
Widow Jolene stand in front of Baeu's grave pretending to cry on a big black body guards thick arms.
Jolene: I had the coroner do a GenStock test. He only got 800. I thought it was appropriate I put it on his tomb stone. What do you think?

The end