NEW Story! (Discussion)
Added 2022-08-03 23:19:09 +0000 UTCHey, everyone--
Now that there are three patrons subscribed at the second tier (or, in other words, enough to break a tie), I'll be following through on my commitment to start my first ever CYOA style story. New parts for this story will be a little bit less frequent, as I still plan on spending most of my writing time on stories that are already in progress.
However, I wanted to do things differently for this one. Instead of just jumping into a story, I thought I'd give all you Patreon supporters the opportunity to weigh in. What genre would you be the most interested in reading more of? What kinds of characters? Premise? Setting?
Comment below, or send me a private message if you prefer! And no pressure to answer all the above questions. Just whatever comes to mind. I'd love to hear your ideas.
As always, thank you for the support!
--Lady Lucia
Comments
A short premise. It’s summer but Mike Petrilli isn’t going to enjoy a lot of vacations this year. He needs to close all the open matters at his old office before transferring to the new one. Not that he can blame anyone else but him for it. He was the one who suggested the change to his bosses. He will get a salary bonus for it, but it’s not the only reason. The other and more important is Amanda. They’ll finally be able to go living together in her town. After a life spent as a single father Amanda will be the perfect companion for him. She could also help him fixing some of the troubles from the past. First of all the ones regarding his daughter Claudia and her studies. She’s a clever girl but she can spend hours in front of an open book without absorbing the least notion. And when something about school enters her mind, it is washed away from her memory in a few days. He tried everything with Claudia but never managed to avoid her a poor scholastic career. Amanda is a wonderful teacher and could succeed where he failed. If only she could do half of what she is doing with her daughter Sara. That girl is astonishing: there are more A on her school reports than on the first page of a dictionary. He knows he asked Amanda a lot pleading her to tutor Claudia for the whole summer, but it’s the last chance for the girl to get good marks the next and last year of high school. A failure would mean goodbye to university. For a successful manager as he is, it would mean a total shame. “It won’t be easy” Amanda said. “Claudia isn’t used at studying. Something is stuck in her mind and bringing her on track now could require unconventional methods”. “Whatever it takes, Am” he answered. “We cannot afford another year with bad marks. Do everything it’s necessary. Don’t care if Claudia agrees with it”. She simply nodded. These are his thoughts while driving to Amanda’s. He turns his head to smile at Claudia sitting on the passenger seat. “Are you happy to spend a few months with Sara, dear?”. “Yes daddy, very much”. “But you know you need to study a lot this summer?”. “Yes I do, don’t worry”. “Next year is crucial, we can’t afford another failure”. “I know dad, don’t push too much pressure on me”. “Don’t worry dear, I won’t be there, but Amanda and Sara will help you. Promise me you’ll do whatever they ask”. “I’ve already done hundreds times”. “Once more please”. “I promise to be a good girl and follow all of Amanda and Sara’s rules and orders”. Mike smiled and leaned to kiss his girl.
Jofeyes
2022-09-16 14:31:17 +0000 UTCWhy not? Amanda goes too far with Claudia and the girls blackmail her threatening to tell Mike everything
Jofeyes
2022-08-24 06:27:09 +0000 UTCOr, step daughter(s) ganging up on step mother. The old reverse dynamic thing ?
Robert Soden
2022-08-15 18:39:56 +0000 UTCThinking about a quick preface….
Jofeyes
2022-08-07 10:37:41 +0000 UTCPs. The name Claudia and surname Petrilli are homages to my homecountry and to two of my favorite writers: Claudiaeffe and Panthergirl
Jofeyes
2022-08-07 10:34:23 +0000 UTCAmanda Porter, midforties, soon to be married with Mike Petrilli. Teacher, old fashioned, firmly believes in the ‘no pain no gain’ rule. Mother of Sara. She is the only that understands that Claudia’s problems derives from her father tenderness at that age when she instead needed to be told what to do. And the only way to solve the matter is to bring her there again and discipline her harshly. Mike Petrilli, late forties, met Amanda one year ago on a cruise. Is waiting to be transferred to his company’s office in her town. Will marry her soon. Father of Claudia, whose mother had her without been married and ran away when she was few years old. Growing up a female child as a single father isn’t easy and Mike has always been too tender with his daughter. He hopes that Amanda can put Claudia back on the straight way. Claudia Petrilli teenager, Mike’s daughter. She isn’t either a bad girl or a spoiled brat, but the lack of education strongly affects her school results. She knows she gives her father a big displeasure, but every time she seats in front of a book her mind begins wandering elsewhere. Sara Porter, Amanda’s daughter, two years younger than Claudia. Diligent and well behaving girl, but with few social interactions, because of her strict mother. With her lack of sexual experience she will find her stepsister punishment very exciting and will try to explore her dominant side.
Jofeyes
2022-08-07 10:32:59 +0000 UTCFew more details on characters
Jofeyes
2022-08-07 10:32:47 +0000 UTCi like the idea of stepmother-stepsister agains stepdaughter. however i think we should deepen the character. I mean, the stepdaughter is not good at school and her stepmother is very strict. then both understand the the daughter needs humiliating discipline to focus on studies and submits (back and forth between consense and reluctanc is very erotic). the stepsister can play a double role, she can pretend to be on sister side, while instead is plottting to make things worse for her. it's just a sketch
Jofeyes
2022-08-05 16:00:54 +0000 UTCVery nice idea! Give me some time to think about it
Jofeyes
2022-08-04 11:33:26 +0000 UTC
