Build 14 pt. 2 - A Spherical Universe

Time to upgrade my husband Amicus，oh Amicus,my love

咸豆龙dc

The time of island is the most glittery moment for me！And that ring is soooo meaningful! I can’t to wait the next one!!! (GODS how can I spend the remaining days until it is released!)

Amicus,I love uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!!!!!!!!!!

Finally found a nice time to sit down and read through this. (Along with the previous part of 14) Oh my god that was so sweet. In some ways it was a lot better than if everything about their day just went perfectly. That still would have been enjoyable to read, but perhaps a little trite. This was very good. I love to see how they've reached this point where, when things start to go sour they can pull themselves out of it and turn around completely to having a good time instead of just staying sour. Really demonstrates how much their relationship has grown. On other subjects, I have a little bit of a nagging concern about how the diplomatic meeting went. I hope things aren't going too badly on that front. Theeen there's that creepy scene at the university... Gotta say, the "Other" is kinda reminding of the antagonistic force(s) in Echo. That's frightening on multiple levels.

Rhanz Wolfe

Really love the story!

How long will the story last?Please don't let the story end.

I hope it doesn't end so early,This story is so great that,I cried.

秘境神龙

Wow, that took longer to recover from, talk about strong emotions...may have been a late Valentine's day for me but it was still the happiest day I've had for a real long time. Sorry I took so long after I promised to get this out sooner. As for errors; a small one where Virginia is berating Amicus for being late and asks if he's serious about the holiday but there's a question mark "and" a period in her sentence, when we are about to scold Amicus for talking shit about himself after we wake up from the nightmare the word that "...for saying that about himself..." is missing, when Amicus knocks and calls out for Gaius the word hello is missing an "L" even with all the Os, when Amicus tells us the restaurant is named in our honor "restaurant" is misspelled, after the "question" on the island we think about what it means on Adastra we start the sentence with "Thought" rather than Though "Though I know that...", after that when he talks about a thread of fate there's too many words "...but there is a an invisible thread connecting..." just remove a, after that back at the room when we "grab him" and what it causes the word causes is misspelled "casues", after that when our eyebrows shoot up at his words eyebrows is also misspelled as "eyebroaws", later when we reach out with our free hand "...free and and cup..." the H is missing on the first one to say "hand and", after that we comment how "...some of it shoots up against me chin." it should be "my chin", and finally after that Amicus says "I promise I won't ruin in the next one..." the word in should be removed. Hearing his description of the spherical galaxy theory again really hit me in the feels, gawd, all this space love talk really has me broken as its always been a dream of mine...in a fantasy daydream sort of way...this is just the best game I've ever played and I have no words to describe my real feelings...just thank you!

LLVPandaSevron

Hello, can I ask how long is the work? I really like this work.

please, give them good end,please! +1

please, give them good end,please!

Omg, if only I can be MC, I want to say Yeeeeeesssss!!! I will!!!!!!

Jerry

Yknow I'm just glad there is a Marco's Pizza on Adastra lol

I finally get to read the android build and this is 1st thing I see

OMG, I cried and died at the same damn time!! GODS!..

BlackWolf007

Omg yyyyeeeessssss!!!!! he proposed to the mc, omg i think im going to cry

pandalily20

In fact,I want to be a bottom,sorry Amicus.Thanks for your hard work.

Xiaomingya

Finally you are here

No matter how late, we will like it. Please take good care of yourself !

Oh...my...gawd...I...I...I just can't find the words. This was...amazing...beautiful...emotional...damn I'm still teary eyed. Damn you all for pulling this beautiful scene, gawd damn, I haven't cried and laughed in unison for well over two decades. You jackasses, this was so much, I don't know what to properly respond with....I'll have to recover first...I noticed a couple errors...I'll get them in soon...damn it

LLVPandaSevron

This update was nice! It started a bit slow but turned great. I LOVED the scene we had at the island, it really got me :'). The sex scene was very short, I hope you could add more into it! Also would've totally wanted to bottom for Amicus, so hoping you'll get to work around those if you had time. Thank you again for the great work, and i'll be looking forward to the next one.

Allen Walker

Don't get me wrong, I LOVED the topping scene, but I would have much preffered bottoming for Amicus. Other than that, great update Howly! Can't wait for the next one!!!

Lazarus

So will there be a option to bottom for the sex scene? I'm kinda disappointed that there was only the top, but if that's one of the scenes that was delayed, will it be there by the public version of this update or the next one?

Lazarus

My only complaint is that there was no YES!YES!YES! option for that beautiful scene on the island.

CaptainJackal

I kind of wished there had been an actual choice of whether to be a top or a bottom for the sex scene, isn't much of a choice if all I see is one option. Apart from that, it was good update. Although I am wondering how the negotiations between the Wolves and the Khemians are going and wondering if Marco has a part to play in that before he leaves?

Xenin

Oh god my emotions. Loved every bit of this. Did notice, however, that the MC's name defaults to Marco in two places, once on the island, and once in the bedroom at the end. Don't want to get too specific since it's rather spoilery.

Swearwolf

Omg I wanna cry tears of joy so much right now. Amazing update you guys.!! Well worth it

Jeremy Hybrid

So when Haps is done with the other scene, will that be released with the public build or the next full update?

CaptainJackal

The android version for Adastra comes out up to 24 hours after the initial release. You can find the android update for TSR on Itchio: https://echoproject.itch.io/the-smoke-room

Howly

They'll be one, it sometimes comes out a bit after than the others.

Johnny

I feel like unfortunately if you play android there's no real perks to being a patron, unfortunatly I'm still waiting on updates from the last day of last month for the smoke room, now none of the updates have an android version.

Ain't no android build for this one?

pandalily20

I just got home so it's a good time to play it now you need to relax and rest I'm sure it will be great just like before

kevin150

Amazing but no android build :(

Goddard