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Thoughts?

  

Never put a lot of effort into the title page but I think I am going to start, open for feedback. This should get the point across of who and what this set is about without loads of text or cluttered images all over 

Full image here:

http://erotic3dx.com/dc/TitleJPG.jpg

Thoughts?

Comments

Looks pretty good. An old design strategy is to try and make all of the important type readable from a distance. That idea does, sometimes, conflict with style, though. I'd probably go for bigger type, perhaps placed differently to show the figures, and fewer bullets. And, of course, I'm not crazy about futa, though I love your work. ;-)

Didi & Nok' Tus

Thanks, yea that one was a good one

3Dzen

We've got high expectations. Your Home Invasion set was literally one of the hottest things I've ever seen.

Calista

Brilliant work! I love it! (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ

SexBook _____ ADULT PHOTO AND VIDEO SIGNATURES

i guess you will fix that when you finish the rest of the images

fanof3dartoftheworld

looks good. don't forget that image 44-45 are the same and image 52-53 are the same

fanof3dartoftheworld

I like it a lot and think this will work perfectly!

Bob Fink

Looks very good and professional. The short tags will help customers to get a grip what the set is about. Potentially you could add Futa on Girl and Deepthroat,

Nebula77

The Meow cap is great and really makes her look, but Teacher is the one that looks like she got the cream, (even if she didn't get the cream pie...)

Magnus Carolinus

thanks man, yea the Meow cap will stay even in future sets with her, its her signature :)

3Dzen

Like the title and followup. The meow cap is such a killer, love her questioning hurting facial.

Jack Pinder

Yay! :D oh yeah gotta have text

End of week not done yet

3Dzen

looks great. does this mean youv finished making the set?


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