Creating Diversity (TG RC & Breast TF)
Added 2022-08-09 08:13:07 +0000 UTCBryce Carson accidentally signs a magical contr
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I understand what you mean there! This was a commission and that part was a specified requirement. I might actually edit this post to include a second, sweeter version of the story along the lines of what you suggest : )
Fox Face
2022-08-09 20:15:32 +0000 UTCI've gotta say, I loved 90% of this story. I especially loved how Fatima's changing pov creates such a contrast with Bryce's initial pov (which was delightfully cringe, thank you). I'm a sucker for cultural changes and character development, so this having both was fantastic, well above the usual TG cliche narrative. However, it took a turn toward the end which kinda took me out of it and made me dislike Martina quite a bit. I guess I was expecting a different, more explicitly romantic/cute conclusion, but it *did* have the Breast TF tag for a reason, so I should have expected something was gonna go down. Still enjoyed most of it, just not the last part.
Halima Abdi
2022-08-09 14:19:13 +0000 UTC