Gargoyle Pinup WIP 2
Added 2018-07-28 22:03:08 +0000 UTCGetting some good work done my friends! Hope you like it so far~
Comments
Well look at it this way, if I didn't see any merit in what you brought up I wouldn't feel compelled to fix it! Pretty much everything you've commented on has been spot on thus far and I typically agree.
PunishedKom
2018-07-29 03:16:28 +0000 UTCHappy to help! Just a warning: my artistic skills are limited to stick men. Take any and all criticism I give with a large grain of salt. =P
DM_5
2018-07-29 02:25:22 +0000 UTCI do want to thank you for consistently giving your opinion when things don't look right! When you get to be even a mid tier bigger artist on me you find less and less people who are willing or able to give constructive criticism. Your input is always appreciated haha.
PunishedKom
2018-07-29 02:17:13 +0000 UTCThat should work; the motion lines will definitely help. :)
DM_5
2018-07-29 02:12:10 +0000 UTCProblem is it's way too late to fix that, as I'm almost done with the coloring. rip Best I can do is add some motion lines to distort it a bit and try to cover the mistake slightly. Motion lines will make it look more exaggerated and intentional.
PunishedKom
2018-07-29 02:10:09 +0000 UTCIt's not a bad idea, but her breast wouldn't bounce up that far. I'd lower it so that her left nipple is equal to the top of her right breast.
DM_5
2018-07-29 00:53:11 +0000 UTCI like to draw them jiggling and such. Like she just shifted her body to the right and the left one bounced upwards in response, but maybe I'm not very good at it. Ah well. Gotta learn somehow heh
PunishedKom
2018-07-29 00:48:28 +0000 UTCWhy is her left breast pushed up so far? It looks odd, since her other breast is hanging normally.
DM_5
2018-07-29 00:34:24 +0000 UTC
