Patron Early Viewing/Edits - BoC Act 2: Ch 12
Added 2022-12-19 00:31:04 +0000 UTCEDITS: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hHnGLf93G7NyzqZyDncOWdscscJIVgjdOzU4_56lCHY/edit?usp=sharing
READ ONLY: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wxWm6_mrEIFnmmpyUASKn6UnS6qnaR4Gl6kzSxFEPlU/edit?usp=sharing
This one was exhausting.
Comments
This chapter was beautiful. Simply beautiful. You evoke such a range of emotions. For someone who used to suffer depression, the latter half is something truly inspiring. Thank you. God bless you.
CMDR Dantae
2022-12-19 20:56:36 +0000 UTCFinally! The return of Corvi!
Teh One & TrueTabi
2022-12-19 18:24:57 +0000 UTCAnother good chapter. Despite my feelings that Corvi's arc was taking too long (and I really think that's more an unfortunate repercussion of the online serial format), it was still plenty emotional seeing him finally confront himself.
James G.
2022-12-19 18:11:41 +0000 UTCLokoko was brought up again this chapter. I’m hoping this is more of a ninetales thing.
Stephen Place
2022-12-19 15:47:14 +0000 UTCLoved the corvi section it brought a tear to my eye
Spartanstoryteller
2022-12-19 15:36:32 +0000 UTCI get where you are coming from, but personally I like that it's not just completely ignored. Fuggmann has said before that he has no intent in writing this story in that direction, and I'm inclined to believe him. However, he is also writing these characters to feel like real people, and this is most certainly a topic that would be discussed between real people. I think that it would make the people -and the world- feel less real if the story just ignores such a large part of the human mind.
Appl
2022-12-19 08:21:46 +0000 UTCDamn that was good, why is someome chopping onions near me?
Doodlyboy15
2022-12-19 07:30:04 +0000 UTCTears, well done.
Powernap
2022-12-19 05:27:57 +0000 UTCYou just made my whole day
Zach
2022-12-19 05:01:56 +0000 UTCI fully agree with you on this one. I can understand the friendship and love but anything further than that doesn't make sense honestly and it's a pretty gross thought.
The Golem Crafter
2022-12-19 03:29:51 +0000 UTCI guess the rumors about Ninetales being vengeful are flaring up here. I wonder if lee will contact lokoko on that forum for advice.
MooMoo195
2022-12-19 02:34:12 +0000 UTCWow just wow. Amazing job on this chapter. So many writers aspire to evoke a portion of the amount of emotions i felt reading this. I cant say it enough, but good fucking job.
2022-12-19 02:07:49 +0000 UTCDid not expect another drop so soon
Hazel Kings
2022-12-19 02:03:33 +0000 UTCSo good, I have no words, every new chapter it feels like you improve your ability to captivate my attention, i might have to increase my pledge soon.
Prinny
2022-12-19 01:38:55 +0000 UTCPlease stay away from these Pokémon human relationships. I don’t like the foreboding. Why are you catering to the horny crowd ? Just direct them to a porn site…
Sean
2022-12-19 01:35:17 +0000 UTC
