Early Viewing: Borne of Caution Act 2: Interlude 4
Added 2023-07-04 01:18:18 +0000 UTCBoC is back with Act 2: Interlude 4. Real chapter in the next few days. Due to me being busy tomorrow, this probably won't be public until the 5th.
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Comments
So if this a world where Teams are serious business, then i wonder how successful Team Rocket, Team Flare, or Team Galactic are right now. Team Magma and Team Aqua were always small time in their goals by comparison to those organizations, so ones gotta wonder if they are poised to take over the world, or destroy it atm.
Orion Dye
2023-07-04 14:04:29 +0000 UTCthis a powerful chapter in its impact and world building
Maltec
2023-07-04 13:51:33 +0000 UTCFurther explanation of Maxie’s min-maxing techniques is super interesting. It also leads me to think that he’s very vulnerable to ambushes that deny him the chance to prepare and control the fight. With Archie having seen some of this, I think Aqua just became the more dangerous organization because I don’t think Maxie is a match for an Archie that knows his tricks.
Russell Todd
2023-07-04 08:45:25 +0000 UTCBoy how dark this chapter is! The fact that Claydol is using many Baltoy as living energy charges is very stressful, I think the league will have to add a new line to the check-list of crimes done by magma team. This chapter is incredibly beautiful thank you, the depth of worldbuilding and the characters are what make me deeply enjoy this series. The Cinibar incident is related to this story, oh boy, will we see a pissed off Mewtwo again? A drug that takes away your free will, I'm not surprised if a legendary Pokemon comes down a second later to bludgeon them to death!
ONE PE.01
2023-07-04 08:23:04 +0000 UTC
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