Early Viewing: Borne of Caution - Act 2 - Finale
Added 2024-11-20 23:12:33 +0000 UTCHere we go. Please enjoy.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YX-OGAOfRrghz7TJk2sWeuVYD_2FocokvzrwH6k6UCo/edit?usp=sharing
Comments
Well... that escalated quickly.
daly.c
2024-11-22 02:29:52 +0000 UTCWhere did the picture come from? Was it commissioned cause that's really well done. Also GIRATINA AHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
ricchi ricchi
2024-11-21 22:31:17 +0000 UTChttps://youtu.be/YZNkpCjoqCk?si=4vpeY4vEyFkG5JQV
FillerText
2024-11-21 14:08:01 +0000 UTCIt's mentioned in act 2: chapter 23, about a dozen paragraphs in.
Sum Ting Wong
2024-11-21 11:40:40 +0000 UTCWait really? Did i miss that on multiple re-reads AND while actively looking for it just now? In which chaper is it mentioned?
Luco
2024-11-21 08:28:12 +0000 UTCNot sure if foreshadowing but Lees 'mon capacity was increased to SEVEN when he got Sylveon...
Sum Ting Wong
2024-11-21 07:45:19 +0000 UTCHello there, General Griev..., uh, I mean, Griseous. Sadly, only Lee/Nine could make that wordplay, because it absolutey works as one of Zinnias nicknames. The crater lake is usually flat as a mirror, no? So Giratina could absolutely just fly out, right? Also, what a cliff. Now to wait for a few months as Caution goes on the backburner.
Luco
2024-11-21 07:24:46 +0000 UTCI KNEW it was garatina! Love Zinnia’s new outfit. Can’t wait to see what you hit us with next arc. Also, I can’t wait to see Norman get smacked down HARD.
WhatAFungi
2024-11-21 05:40:36 +0000 UTCyay!
Runaway_Cactuar
2024-11-21 05:15:56 +0000 UTCNice art and song choice at the end.
Soah1086
2024-11-21 04:43:58 +0000 UTCThat was one hell of an ending!
Straven
2024-11-21 04:24:40 +0000 UTCYour YouTube link is borked for me
V01D
2024-11-21 03:56:08 +0000 UTCI'd actually completely forgotten Giratina was dragon typed. That clears things up mighty well. Great chapter, I almost expected it to end when I saw the picture of zinnia coming up in the Google doc, great depiction by the by. While this ending marks a Hiatus for Borne of Caution, will you be continuing your other works or taking a full on break from writing?
Jericho Rising
2024-11-21 03:37:26 +0000 UTCOh my god i absolutely loved this
nasapeepolover116
2024-11-21 01:51:15 +0000 UTCthese Sceptile seeds could be used as grenades
Yona Ksr
2024-11-21 01:33:06 +0000 UTCAlso, appropriately eldritch god styling, well done.
Nathan Ganesan
2024-11-21 01:30:28 +0000 UTCGiratina is able to create rifts in space-time, so perhaps he is responsible for Lee being here in the first place?
Nathan Ganesan
2024-11-21 01:26:31 +0000 UTCAfter a long two years, what a way to end the act with that reveal! Can't wait for the next one, hope you can take as long a break as you need!
MrPerson0
2024-11-21 00:42:07 +0000 UTC"Sorry about this folks." Inhale. Exhale. "...ITS MOTHERFUCKING GIRATINA!!! YES! YES! JUST-! YES! I FUCKING LOVE THIS GUY!"
Glitched Knights
2024-11-21 00:15:55 +0000 UTCHoly hell. Giratina with a Shiro Sagisu backing track. Absolutely excellent and sent chills down my spine. However, I am suitably anxious to know what the dragon of death wants with Lee?
Koutetsu Oni
2024-11-21 00:11:45 +0000 UTCI can't believe that Giratina is calling Lee and ninetails about thier cars extended Warranty
michael schiff
2024-11-21 00:07:15 +0000 UTCHonestly, it makes the most sense as Giritina represents the underworld. Lee should be dead by all counts, but I am so excited to see what the reason for reaching out is I can't sit still wondering what he wants from our hero.
Dizzy
2024-11-20 23:45:12 +0000 UTCI can't say anything without saying spoilers but I love this I love this a lot
Phoenix Bugg
2024-11-20 23:42:14 +0000 UTCYES!!! After so long finally a new chapter! Amazing as always my friend, I kinda figured it was a legendary trying to contact Lee but I wasn't 100% sure it was Giratina. Hope to see more awesome chapters my man.
wretched Cat
2024-11-20 23:27:38 +0000 UTC
