Patron Editing: Borne of Caution Act 2, CH 2
Added 2022-06-04 07:53:10 +0000 UTCHoney's its 3am. Time for your update.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1QMbS2HoqloNHhrSr159NrLEcQxy89z0U161fa6qICnc/edit?usp=sharing
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I'm here joinging patreon thinking there's chap 3 😭
Touch
2022-06-27 16:56:25 +0000 UTCAmazing chapter as always. Now we just gotta convince enough people to throw money at you, so we can get these wonderful chapters more often.
Daulton Young
2022-06-15 07:32:35 +0000 UTCMakes me happy he was able and willing to make one. I especially love that far as I know he sticks to RL first and foremost as all should, but still finds some time to bless us with such a bloody good read of a story!!!! I've already reread the story a few times now!
Straven
2022-06-05 19:03:22 +0000 UTCGreat chapter, makes me happy to be a patreon ;)
Miguel
2022-06-05 08:08:25 +0000 UTCThis was just amazing, a perfect blend of drama and action, with a little spice of frendship to make things wholesome. I stand amazed once more by this fics ability to surprise again, and again by how insanely good it is.
CMDR Dantae
2022-06-05 01:45:58 +0000 UTCMaybe the rocks and the debris on the ground were too sharp to safely move like that? Or maybe Gravity doesn't just increase gravity, but also mass, making it harder to crawl than to walk, since walking is just continuously falling, and we know Pokémon can defy conservation of mass anyway, not to mention being able to locally alter gravity like that makes little sense as it should also allow for an incredible propulsion mechanism.
CMDR Dantae
2022-06-05 01:44:14 +0000 UTCOh damn that was a bloody good read! Thanks!
Straven
2022-06-04 23:40:19 +0000 UTCIn the heat of the moment, the logical solutions may not present themselves. Brendan in his panicked state would've thought "I need to be quick, I must get up and help her!", therefore he would've tried to stand up and run if possible to rescue her. Also, Adrenaline is one hell of a drug.
Planetace
2022-06-04 20:50:11 +0000 UTCInteresting decision at the end there. Looks like someone is going to have a chonky team. I can already see snarky trainers asking if it’s to compensate for something. For Brendan’s feat, I wonder why he decided to stand instead of crawling on hands and knees. More stable, better weight distribution, and better traction for pulling. I might need to go back and see if he was needing to lift up in addition to pulling laterally, as that’d explain his stance
Russell Todd
2022-06-04 18:11:48 +0000 UTCwow.. just simply amazing. great length, making progress, awesome character dynamics, battle and cool pokeknowledge.. thanks for the chapter!
AlthePal
2022-06-04 17:51:22 +0000 UTCThis is amazing
Tim Maguire
2022-06-04 15:10:10 +0000 UTCDammit, I have things to do... Want to read so badly...
CMDR Dantae
2022-06-04 14:38:15 +0000 UTCFantastic chapter.
Fabhar
2022-06-04 11:34:49 +0000 UTC
