Patron Editing: Borne of Caution Act 2 : Ch 6
Added 2022-08-26 00:10:00 +0000 UTCAll yours. I proofread as best I can but I'm running a bit of a fever and might have missed something. Please mark it and I'll fix it.
Also, regarding the thanks section at the bottom. After thinking it over, I've decided that if you guys want to, you can sign there with whatever name you want to show your support. It'll save time for everyone and insure only the people who want it can have their name on it. Have at it.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/19Z5iy8F3S6SITyJEMnV3ILk9NhyHTf7ajV6PfU4mTww/edit?usp=sharing
Comments
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Andres
2022-08-26 19:05:12 +0000 UTCGood work brother
Hector Gregorio
2022-08-26 04:49:13 +0000 UTCdang those are some distinctly sinister undertones in that conversation with maxie yikes
Conspiracy
2022-08-26 04:28:21 +0000 UTCGreat chapter. Signed as woodN_forks instead of my actual name.
Gabriel Morales
2022-08-26 02:42:39 +0000 UTCThat little kitten was just flat out heart stopping A.D.O.R.A.B.L.E!
Straven
2022-08-26 02:40:31 +0000 UTCIf Ninetales could do something like that,(mind control Courtney) I get the feeling she would most definitely do it. If it weren't for the kind of person Lee is Ninetales is giving vibes she would like to be preemptively vengeful on his behalf. Makes me wonder how she will react when/if corvi comes back.
K
2022-08-26 01:11:41 +0000 UTCAnd considering the tone of some of Courtney's thoughts, it might not be just the protocols that magma put into her head. Brendan saves the damsel and breaks her conditioning? Fun subplot perhaps
WirelessGrapes
2022-08-26 01:10:03 +0000 UTCUh oh, they got master stranger protocols 👀
Green0Photon
2022-08-26 00:54:32 +0000 UTCGot goosebumps from the dark nature of Magma at the end there. Great chapter.
V
2022-08-26 00:49:30 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter. Get some rest man.
Orion Dye
2022-08-26 00:48:06 +0000 UTCLoved the chapter, hope you feel better!
Tyler Tate
2022-08-26 00:47:22 +0000 UTC
