Borne of Desire CH 10 Early viewing and editing
Added 2022-09-02 00:51:33 +0000 UTCHeya,
So with so many people, I understand it can be a bother for edits and reading to go on at once. With regards to that, we're doing two docs from now on. One will be read only, and the other is open for comments. Here we go.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1pfhbwImboVW-j0LUfqKAo9AcY3XXedPiVzG_9xrmAQw/edit?usp=sharing Editors copy
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SxCMI7F6FE-ddjSXDRVx9jsPeVa6KVB2Y-43PeCn1d0/edit?usp=sharing Read only copy (Will be mass updated with fixes every so often )
As a notice, I'm going out of town for Labor Day this weekend, so this one will likely not be open for edits very long. I'll need to upload it tomorrow morning or it'll have to sit for days.
Comments
Lulu abs... (ʘ௰ʘ)
Drew6
2022-09-02 09:51:58 +0000 UTCGood work brother
Hector Gregorio
2022-09-02 05:05:53 +0000 UTCReally hoping for him to explain Genre Savvy at some point. That really needs an entry at the top and some bold lettering. Being genre savvy is really helpful, and it's clear that no matter how much Lulu shakingly believes it, it's really only Julian who's Genre Savvy at the moment. When it really clicks for Lulu, when she really gets it, that'll be a cool moment.
Green0Photon
2022-09-02 03:18:00 +0000 UTCYou've turned into a writing machine! I'm so unused to having fast updates to this that I was caught off guard by this -- despite having established a pattern of it being now-ish. Time to read! Yay!
Green0Photon
2022-09-02 01:05:39 +0000 UTC
