Patreon Editing: Borne of Caution Act 2 Ch 8
Added 2022-09-21 08:25:33 +0000 UTCThank you patreon for saying the post went through then not showing up.
EDITS: https://docs.google.com/document/d/17UIpGregPlWsJ37RaDdl-HcV5anp-7hqwCoHxKau7Qk/edit?usp=sharing
READ ONLY:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1aTlTui0hbBNnau6uowtNO2rUD0e8m_jeKvi2TA0CYaA/edit?usp=sharing
This was done a few hours ago, but for some reason when I hit "Publish" patreon just sat and loaded forever. Lets give her another go.
Comments
I wonder if at some point grovyle's quick attack will evolve into extremespeed
MooMoo195
2022-09-22 14:50:36 +0000 UTCI'm seeing a very possible win, not without one hell of a fight but I don't doubt this one will make the streams/online forums BLOW THE ***** UP!
Straven
2022-09-22 00:34:48 +0000 UTCBreathtaking this chapter was breathtaking. This fight will be Magnificient, I'm anticipating it already. All of your fights have been marvels so far, the Gym battles especially. Ah, I can imagine it already. Though, this might be tough for Lee... Even with his team in top shape, is he about to lose a Gym battle for the first time? Or will he manage a draw like with Brawly?
CMDR Dantae
2022-09-21 22:59:41 +0000 UTCWhat Stephen said, and they also call her “Gym heir” and not “Gym Leader”
Jacob Warner
2022-09-21 22:48:42 +0000 UTCEarlier that chapter: "It's just… My grandpa, the current Leader, has been having me take over more and more of the challengers lately, and he might want me to battle you. I thought I would have more time to prepare for you, is all."
Stephen Place
2022-09-21 22:44:24 +0000 UTCIt says Lee and Brendan will fight Flannery, but Act 2: Chapter 4 has Lee say this: Lee's face is much more collected than the buzzing thoughts in his head, Vulpix muses to herself. "You know this means you're making Vulpix into a giant problem for your own match against us in a week, right?" He asks with a smirk. Moore waves him off. "Bah. Small price to pay to receive a brand new move and witness the birth of a Ninetales." After a beat, Moore adds, "In some Kanto legends, they say witnessing a Vulpix evolve into a Ninetales is said to grant a divine sort of luck upon all who watch. Did you know that?" "I do now," Lee quips. So now I am really confused. Is Lee fighting Flannery two weeks before her debut for some reason or is this just a typo?
CMDR Dantae
2022-09-21 22:05:08 +0000 UTCNinetales seems so far ahead of the rest of the team. The real question is how far ahead she is of Moore's.
BlueGraine
2022-09-21 16:59:52 +0000 UTCThe last bit was brilliant! The early and middle sections could use some polish, though I can't identify exactly where that polish needs to be, it just felt a tad bit stiff, still excellent though
Rehan
2022-09-21 16:05:55 +0000 UTCMan has bgm and opening speech, Lee's in trouble! Love the chapter and the fact that they'll come more consistently, have a good one!
Jaxer30
2022-09-21 13:32:35 +0000 UTCThat ending was epic, loved the chapter. Hype way to start the day.
V
2022-09-21 12:43:24 +0000 UTCBruh moment. God damn I'm glad you're updating faster now because I'd die if I had to wait a month or two after this cliffhanger
Green0Photon
2022-09-21 12:18:13 +0000 UTCHoly shit that’s some Borne of Desire energy from Moore at the end. I love the esoteric moments, love the “anime hard lines blurring” mental images I get from the honor-bound rage screams. Great chapter all in all.
Gabriel Morales
2022-09-21 11:45:44 +0000 UTCI could see interlude about Ash protest i want to fight moore like lee but get unofficial match after gym battle 6 vs 6 instead.
Lucaman_P
2022-09-21 11:35:16 +0000 UTCHehe boy. I love this. I hope grovyle gets his time to shine.
Ethan Prince
2022-09-21 10:35:06 +0000 UTCLee expected to face a simple story progression boss fight, only to accidentally hit the necessary checkmarks to activate the secret boss that is 10x harder than the final boss.
Planetace
2022-09-21 10:32:10 +0000 UTC
