The Witch of Kurikuto #2 p29
Added 2024-08-28 14:18:38 +0000 UTC
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I can see the appeal of wanting to show ~something~, but I don't think you should show EVERYTHING of the impact. Maybe a closeup of her arms, maybe a leg buckling, enough to let us know that it hit, and it did NOT go well for her... but nothing that shows the FULL extent of the damage. Giving us bits and pieces lets us share in the audience shock, like the whole scene has created a ringing in our ears, and we can't quite process what we've just seen. The full damage shot is best saved for what I assume is coming up in a page or two.
Cirian
2024-09-01 07:29:36 +0000 UTCThe drama comes from the suspense of ~not~ seeing it.
Cirian
2024-09-01 07:21:09 +0000 UTCMy other thought is by not showing it exactly you let the reader come up with the worst image in their own mind? I don’t know both seem like valid paths? I’m not sure there’s a best,
Edolon
2024-09-01 06:06:36 +0000 UTCI can just hear that semi-musical tone a microphone makes in a situation like this when it's knocked over...
Rhio2k
2024-08-31 04:16:44 +0000 UTCI've actually been thinking about this and I'm considering that I did too much build-up here to not show the impact. I think I skipped over it because I wasn't sure HOW to show it, but I had an idea yesterday that I think would work
Rick Griffin
2024-08-30 15:01:07 +0000 UTCI don't know. I mean, all of the build-up was supposed to find its climax in Saki's 'sacrifice'. I think the punch had to be delivered harder to the reader. Once, Rick did this with a scene in the "Jungle Fever" Housepets! arc -but it worked because the whole scene was built in one page. One moment, Uncle Deadeye stops Jata's mighty punch. Then they look at each other, and Jata is visibly scared now. And then cut to birds flying away. Insert joke. And it worked just fine, it was dramatic and funny. Now? It's like something's amiss, emotion is not fully delivered. The best solution would've been seeing Saki's sacrifice reflected in Ideka's eye, making us feel the weight of her mistake together with her. Just my 2 cents. I'm going to crawl in my corner now...
Valerio
2024-08-30 07:56:48 +0000 UTC...Are you planning to put the page where Saki blocks in the paper edition? Because it's...weird not to see what happened to big black woman. Such a dramatic moment, lost!
Valerio
2024-08-29 21:03:03 +0000 UTCNever seen beach volleyball turn into a murder before
Arid
2024-08-29 13:39:13 +0000 UTCOn one hand I like there being a few days between pages, gives you time to think about and appreciate the page, hypothesize where the story is going, talk with people about it. On the other sometimes the next page can’t come soon enough :p Both these things are true Hopefully Ideka knows lots of healing magic too
Edolon
2024-08-29 05:55:00 +0000 UTCPart of me wonders if this was Saki's plan. Beating her in sports seems like limited room for healing. Driving Ideka to hurt her (Saki) could really open Ideka up to what have I done remorse. While at the same time Saki's profession may have had her built up a tolerance for being hurt and able to recover.
Sicle_Family
2024-08-29 01:47:50 +0000 UTCIdeka should probably still be watching the ball.
Vicki M.
2024-08-28 21:45:07 +0000 UTCinsert pacha meme
Vaga the jaguar aka spice seagoat
2024-08-28 20:35:13 +0000 UTCpure story telling love this soooo much
Vaga the jaguar aka spice seagoat
2024-08-28 20:35:00 +0000 UTCI think the worry and dread of the scene is much more impactful by not showing us.
Cirian
2024-08-28 20:29:41 +0000 UTCNo impact scene?
cerberus0814
2024-08-28 19:44:51 +0000 UTCEpic!
Jonathan
2024-08-28 18:38:43 +0000 UTCYamcha.jpg incoming
ArcadeDragon
2024-08-28 18:29:32 +0000 UTCI fixed! I missed it somehow through the whole comic XD
Thomas G.
2024-08-28 16:58:45 +0000 UTCIt’s okay. Saki rolled a 10 for health bar.
Andrea Andrew
2024-08-28 16:49:46 +0000 UTCHopefully Saki will come out fine from all this, but seems this was the push Ideka needed even if a bit hurtful
Grey Hawk
2024-08-28 16:41:48 +0000 UTC*Her, Ideka is a woman
Grey Hawk
2024-08-28 16:40:44 +0000 UTCWelp, you killed her. Nice one.
Othello
2024-08-28 16:24:28 +0000 UTCcalling it now, saki drew all five pieces of exodia
Gryphoneer
2024-08-28 15:45:30 +0000 UTCOh nononono
Brocade
2024-08-28 15:26:07 +0000 UTCK.O
Dhaka Yeena
2024-08-28 14:57:51 +0000 UTCThe keep the suspense going page
OhWolfy
2024-08-28 14:57:43 +0000 UTC😢
Tiberium
2024-08-28 14:49:26 +0000 UTCAnd now you discover that winning wasn't everything...
Valerio
2024-08-28 14:45:16 +0000 UTCOoooooh ... that's gotta hurt. And I feel like she knew she wasn't going to lose .. so she had to make her "lose".
Thomas G.
2024-08-28 14:42:13 +0000 UTCShe took the hit!! That’s one way to break Ideka’s wall. Sacrifice…..
Vet
2024-08-28 14:20:46 +0000 UTCOhhhhh crap......
Beeton
2024-08-28 14:19:30 +0000 UTC
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