Regarding the pace of story progression in my comics
Added 2025-06-30 00:16:12 +0000 UTCI honestly think that the most exciting things are in the details. I don't like comics that jump straight into the action and I think that attention to detail makes all the difference, especially in scenes of revelation, undressing, etc...
However, I think it's important to know your opinion, since I might be, let's say, overdoing it xD
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Hey Tim! Thanks for the comment and yes, I had that feeling too, there are some scenes that I think could be reduced, like scenes that have no relevance to the story like a character going up the stairs, sometimes what could be 2 renders I end up doing 4 or 5, things like that. About the Freya scene you mentioned, could you tell me which pages they would be? Please.
Lady Abysso (Patron)
2025-07-01 02:17:03 +0000 UTCYes! That's exactly the idea! I'm very happy that you liked it and that I'm managing to convey the message in my work. I think that our true sexual organs are our brains and how they are stimulated in situations and that's what I try to do in the stories by showing how desire and lust can betray the characters' thoughts.
Lady Abysso (Patron)
2025-07-01 02:08:02 +0000 UTCI voted for the first option but not because I dislike the detail but because i feel there is a bit to much going on sometimes. Things that should take a bit longer don't feel as long as they should, ending up giving a lot of clutter. I loved GoL2 but when Freya is being broken down it feels like too much was happening at once. There's always a balance and, depending on who you ask, that is difficult to get right. Edit: I see these posts in reverse so I just saw the one about the text. XD
Timothy Guns
2025-06-30 17:20:00 +0000 UTCI like the detail, and the text which fleshes things out. I enjoy watching the character's will, as it were, crumble in the face of desire and lust. And I enjoy how the text details how that is playing out in the character's mind. I find I am less interested in the dominating character's who have detailed thoughts about how dominant they are.
Reiknar Maelwaed
2025-06-30 03:35:02 +0000 UTC
