Chapter 6: Page 212
Added 2016-05-31 19:32:53 +0000 UTCAaron "I want you to trust me"
Brynn "Trust me..."
Poor Arco is just going through the ringer these last two days.
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I keep looking back to this page and love it more each time <3
PantherLion
2016-06-05 20:04:59 +0000 UTCEXACTLY~
Mccull
2016-05-31 21:07:32 +0000 UTCThe bruises are are really nice touch. I probably wouldn't have missed them if they weren't there, but they add so much to this, particularly the framing in the last panel and the ambiguity over who's heart is hurting here. Likewise the way you handled the mood weather over the last couple of pages, from the clouds rolling in to the rain on the drive home. It certainly reflects how Arco is feeling.
Auldr
2016-05-31 20:17:50 +0000 UTCArco is clearly shaken and not thinking clearly. He's just offered to give up his dream course to keep Brynn safe. How long before he regrets that decision and begins to blame Brynn for it? No, Brynn's instincts are right on here. He has to be able to stand on his own in the same world WITH Arco. Of course, Arco does not at all consider that HE is just as much at risk as Brynn when it comes to the open ocean. He has better odds of staying alive for longer, but sea is an unforgiving place for humans.
Auldr
2016-05-31 20:12:16 +0000 UTCHe feels so guilty. on the one hand he saved crouton's life but on the other hand he hurt his crouton and left a bruise. Poor Arco.
beachblondey
2016-05-31 20:07:24 +0000 UTCAnd Arco with "Do you trust me or NOT?" ringing in his ears...
Auldr
2016-05-31 20:05:10 +0000 UTC*gives Arco all the big orca hugs*
PantherLion
2016-05-31 19:38:45 +0000 UTC
