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Chapter 3 - 12

I hope this update gives you guys lots of insight <3 I don't *think* it takes much reading between the lines to see what's happening here. All Kinley has done since he found out Fletch was coming after them on this trip, was be unpleasant. It's inevitable that his "friends" would start to have an opinion on the whole thing... even if that opinion isn't what you might have been expecting! 

Needless to say, I'd love to know what you all are thinking. <3 As usual lol


Also noteworthy -- I feel like we've ALL been on a roadtrip or vacation at some point where you get up early in the morning, stop at *ahem* McDongles for breakfast, then get on the road. <3 (peep the McDongles sign if you didn't...)


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Mccull

Also i literally hate those two assfaces.

J.K. Hogan

Don't worry, Texas has already ruined Texas for you.

J.K. Hogan

The G fell off the sign!

Mccull

mcdongles! try our new an us pounder !!

CactusMan

I'm sorry to hear about your grandma. I hope you're feeling better, covid sucks. Make sure you rest those arms.

rippingoffmyface

Heyo - hope everyone is well! Sorry I’ve been silent lately.. I was traveling internationally to see family and attend my grandma’s 99th birthday. I got home and immediately got covid. Then my grandma died and I had to fly back. Got home, and now I’m in Arizona. So much flying - my arms are killing me 💀. This scene was a ton of fun to review. The characters are developing nicely. ALSO: make sure you zoom in and read what’s on the McDongles sign. It’s hard to see on the phone, but it’s one of those delicious Easter eggs. Fre shavocados for everyone!

B. Rowdy Lufkin

Judas, happy to accept all the compliments LOL <3 As for Dick and Priscilla.... Fletch knows of them-- maybe has seen them or met them in passing-- but he's not friends with them. He only sees them as extensions of Kinley at this point.

Mccull

I'm very relieved to find out that Fletch knew those two weren't his friends. It really made me sad to think that those two were treating him that way and he still thought they were his friends. OMG that's sign! It really made my morning! Also sparkly Judas is adorable!

rippingoffmyface

McDongles seems like the perfect place for all three of them tbh. Lol. >:) I can tell... you are not on board with Kinley crew yet ahah. Thats okay. Thats good LOL

Mccull

Dick and Prissy really are jerks. Really don't like Fletch huh? I get Kinley is mad but stick up for your friend at least. McDongles seems like the perfect place for Dick. At least they're not wrong. It may be the best thing that's ever happened. To Fletcher maybe. I'm sure they'll have a rotten time in Texas 🤣

Quadrant

YOU KNOW WHAT??? LOL I didn't even realize I'd made that parallel. Ahahaha thats pretty funny. :) You found a ~subconscious~ layer. As for Kinley, Dick and Priscilla... and Fletch and now Judas! Theyre gonna have to learn how to cohabitate. Theyre in it for the longhaul now!

Mccull

I am very mc-taken aback by the "friends" opinions indeed. And while they are indeed laying it on mc-thick, I have to respect the straightforward call out. I've had my fair share of trips with folks who have one thing go wrong for them and then make it everyone else's problem. Also I'm excited to be seeing more of Kinley's inner conflict between Priscilla and Dick and Fletcher. I'm very curious to see what's next in store for the spikey head. Also also I can't be the only one seeing the parallel between Priscilla calling Judas hot and Jaxson openly flirting with Fletch and the boys responding all possessive respectively. Srsly it can't just be me right?

Kaila Respicio

Kinley will reveal to us in time what was going through his head and the reasons leading up to his decision! This update is meant to give us a little more than just the surface with Priscilla and Dick. :) They will have their small roles going forward. Maybe more than even I initially intended (that's always how it goes with these stories lol)

Mccull

… So. Kinley insisted that Fletch had to come with them to see this band. Then left without him. So leaving Fletch was due to, what, peer pressure? I mean, they’re young, so I can see it. Kinda shitty friends you got there, Kinley. This whole trip was going to be super awkward even if it had gone the way it was “supposed” to, if Kinley’s friends don’t like Fletch (or his mom or his puppy dog tendencies). And if Kinley was otherwise fine until Fletch revealed he’d followed them anyway, then why did he invite Fletcher in the first place? Favorite band or no, it seems like somehow stringing Fletch along… I know why Fletcher said yes. Road-trip, away from his mom, to see his favorite band? That might be worth putting up with a couple dingleberries, if Kinley isn’t a dick all the time. So, Kinley, what was your motivation for inviting him? What was your motivation for leaving him behind? Do you even know the answers? 🧐

Sagando Mirasta


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