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A Curse's Passion Chapter 6 (Leaving the Dursleys)

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Also, a lot of the topics Emily and Harry talk about, they've already talked about in their initial hang out.

Victory For The People

"Emily stood there in a simple black dress that was anything but simple in effect, her dark hair falling loose around her shoulders." she's blonde, yes?

Victory For The People

I noticed this as well.

Asta

This chapter seems disjointed in the early parts of it. Hard to comprehend what is going on. You end one scene and contradict that scene in the next paragraph that starts the next part of the chapter. Other than that i am enjoying the story.

J T


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