Chapters 164-5: Bloodline
Added 2024-02-09 18:00:06 +0000 UTCComments
Nice conclusion to the arc, good to see that the MC is finally getting a power boost. 1 change I would consider though, is maybe editing the rhino battle so that Nick uses his 2 remaining darts and 1 wand blast. Showing he was out of options near the end and upping the stakes? Maybe add that he tried to use them to save Sarah when she was trapped, but to no avail.
Ocean
2026-01-07 14:26:20 +0000 UTCWay too short of a chapter
Zen-RPG
2024-02-11 14:19:47 +0000 UTCAsdfg. Cliffffdddddd
Matt
2024-02-09 22:25:52 +0000 UTCThey will all be in the next chapter.
Bryan Dickerson
2024-02-09 19:06:41 +0000 UTCSorry, this was all written months ago, so what happens on what day is pretty much random.
Bryan Dickerson
2024-02-09 19:04:29 +0000 UTCLeaving over the weekend on class selection. Smh
magic_person#1200
2024-02-09 18:49:33 +0000 UTCIt's not gonna take another 2 chapters to see the rest of the classes right? đ
Smiling Reader
2024-02-09 18:44:54 +0000 UTCthese cliffhangers! argh! tftc
Rylie Harris
2024-02-09 18:35:30 +0000 UTC
