Chapters 195-6: Memories and Maintenance
Added 2024-02-29 18:00:07 +0000 UTCComments
Typo reddish TENT. Think this should be TINT. Also this 2nd book started well with the arena arc and it was nice to have an intermission between action, but it does seemed to have stretched on now. Maybe consider cutting this filler arc down in the final print.
Ocean
2026-01-08 01:25:19 +0000 UTCThanks for the feedback, it will be over soon and the rest of the book will be much faster paced (there won't be anything like it in the next book either). I'll merge some more chapters to shorten the rest.
Bryan Dickerson
2024-02-29 20:07:52 +0000 UTCThe pace is very slow right now and from my point of view this takes up too many chapters already.
JC
2024-02-29 19:45:27 +0000 UTC
